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请帮忙改篇英语作文My FamilyI have a big family.They are my father,mot

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请帮忙改篇英语作文
My Family
I have a big family.They are my father,mother,grandfather,grandmother and I.
My father and my mother work in a same hospital,but my father is a doctor,my mother is a nurse.They work very hard.My father likes to play on the computer,my mother likes to watch TV.
I’m a student,I’m nine years old,I work in my school.I have many friends.I’m very happy,I like play the computer too.
This is my happy family.
这是一位小学四年级学生的作文
I have a big family.There are my father,mother,grandfather,grandmother and I.My father and my mother work in a same hospital.my father is a doctor,and my mother is a nurse.They all work very hard.My father likes playing on the computer,my mother likes watching TV.I’m still a student,I’m nine years old now,I like makeing friends very much.and I like playing computer too.We’re all very happy everyday.This is my happy family.
要注意:like doing 强调爱好,而like to do 则强调一次性的动作.
还有,写这种作文时可适当用象and这样的连词以流畅.
也不能改你的原意,加工了一下.