各位帮帮忙,请修改下这2篇作文,注意（ 将来时态“将要”或“会+诉”） 第一篇：My Winter Vacation I

各位帮帮忙,请修改下这2篇作文,注意（ 将来时态“将要”或“会+诉”） 第一篇：My Winter Vacation I ha
第二篇：
Keep the School Tidy and Clean
Good afternoon, everyone!
We are studying in this school. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. We don't spit in public. We shouldn't leave rubbish here and there. Don't draw pictures on the wall. Turn off the lights when you leave a class room. We should Wipe a blackboard when after class. We should clean classroom after school. In short
we should keep the school tidy and clean . The school must become more and more beautiful !
That's all . Thank you.
第一篇补充：
My Winter Vacation
I have a happy winter vacation . I wake up 8-9 o'clock every day . I do some homeworks and read some books. Not only the holiday ,bur also we must stick to study . We are about to come Spring Festival . I'm happy very much. In the Spring Festival I and my friends go to play the Fu Zhou. I'm go to kTV singing song . After we going to Zuo Hai park . We like go to undersea world but the ticket is expensive very much. We also going to "Three alleys and seven lanes". There is lively very much , we even eat some delicious snacks . In short , we very happy in Spring Festival . I'm looking forward to this day . After Spring Festival we can going on to learn ,and finish my homework . This is my winter vacation. What about you ?

My Winter Vacation
I had a happy winter vacation . I wake up at 8-9 o'clock every day . I do some homework and read some books. Not only the holiday ,bur also we must stick to study . Spring Festival is coming. I'm happy very much. During the Spring Festival my friends and I will go to play in Fu Zhou. we'll go to kTV to sing . After that we will go to Zuo Hai park . We want to go to the undersea world but the ticket is expensive very much. We will also go to "Three alleys and seven lanes". There is lively very much , besides,we'll eat some delicious snacks . In short , we would be very happy during Spring Festival . I'm looking forward to this day . After Spring Festival we will go on learning ,and finish my homework . This is my winter vacation. What about you ?
Keep the School Tidy and Clean
Good afternoon, everyone!
We study in this school（并不是在这所学校学习完了别人就没事了,要持之以恒地保持环境卫生）. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. We can do something like not spit in public,not leave rubbish here and there,not draw pictures on the wall,turn off the lights when we leave the class room. We should Wipe a blackboard when after class. We should clean classroom after school. In short
we should keep the school tidy and clean . So that the school will become more and more beautiful !
That's all . Thank you.