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帮我看一下这个短文.One day,I walk in the park with my friends .We see

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帮我看一下这个短文.
One day,I walk in the park with my friends .We see two old men are play chess on the table.Just then,a dog jumps on the table.The old men are angry ‘whose dog is it?’ ‘I’m sorry!’ A little boy said‘It’s mine!’ Then he go away.I said‘how naughty the dog is!’ Then we walk to the tree.We see a little girl.She is crying under the tree.‘ what’s matter with you?’I said.‘I can’t find my mother!’ She said sadly.‘Don’t worry!’ I said ‘Let me help you!’ and then,we go to the outlet.Her mother is there .‘think you evry much!’Her mother said.‘your welcome!’ I said.
What a wonderful day!
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