请纠正一些英语表达,有奖!

请纠正一些英语表达,有奖!
a)Let’s take a rest. Let’s go around. There are some fish over there. Can you count how many fish? One, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine and ten. Oh, there are too many fish. And they are beautiful. They are lovely. My baby is lovely too. See your shoes, they are beautiful too.
b)All right, let’s go. Time for lunch. Let’s go back for some juice. It’s so hot today.
c)Wash your hands. Pee pee? Yes, good boy.
d)What can we have for lunch? Ok, great, it smells good. Eat some vegetable. It’s good for you. It’s tasty.
e)Shall we listen to some music? Or we can listen to some English.
f)Let’s have a nap and then we can go shopping afterwards. Tell me baby, what do you like to buy? Ice cream, chocolate, hamburger, tomatoes, milk, sausage and batteries for your toys.
g)Wake up baby, time to go shopping.
h)Let’s check out then you can have the food.
i)Time for dinner now. Let’s wash our hands first. See the hands are so dirty. See what is it? It’s soap. We can use the soap to wash our hands.
j)Let’s read some stories in English. Little Red Riding Hood. Are you happy today? I am sure you are. Say, I am happy. Thank you daddy, thank you mummy.
Time to sleep now, say good night to your mom and dad.

写得不错啊,只有一些小的地方可以改改.
b) Pee pee 太 baby talk 了,说“Do you need to pee?" 较好吧.
d) What should we have for lunch?
e) “Or we can listen to some English.” English what?songs?
f) “Let’s have a nap and then we can go shopping afterwards.” 拿走afterwards,有then就不需要了.
“what do you like to buy?” 说成'What do you want?" 较好,是大人在买,baby 吃吧?
i) 用一个see 就好了.