作业帮请老师帮忙估下英语作文的分数
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请老师帮忙估下英语作文的分数
teamwork has benn playing an increasingly important role in our day to day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some problems as well.
there are different opinions among people as to teamwork.some people suggest that teamwork is best for our study.we need help in the study.we can study more good by teawork.
on the contraru,there are some people in favor of it.at the some time,they say if we are students,we will study in classroom,so time is very important for oneself.but teamwork is bad for our time.and now some students think ,in a class,they don't hope other one is best for oneself.
but in our class.one day,I don't know a paragraph's means.so we were in groups at school to asked other student.then,Iwere know this paragraph's means,and other student study more.
as far as I am concerned,I think we need tesmwork .teamwork shows us how other people's roles fit the purpose of the group and it is tsaches us to be patieut.so we should take a series of effevtive measures to teamwork.nothing is difficult if you put your heant into it.
先说明下,总分25分,我外语很差,所以看语法错误就.不过有很多句子都是之前背好了直接套的,大写打得很麻烦所以在这里是用的小写.
书面问题不大,我唯一能值得肯定的就是我的字了.（成绩悲剧生）
因为我是提前批志愿,而且有外语小分要求,但对完前面的答案离要求还差12分,所以请教了解打分情况的前辈们指点下（要是小分要求没达到,我就掉档了啊啊啊 ）
题目是湖北卷的题目差不多是（在学校里的合作teamwork）的意思.
teamwork has benn playing an increasingly important role in our day to day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some problems as well.
there are different opinions among people as to teamwork.some people suggest that teamwork is best for our study.we need help in the study.we can study more good by teawork.
on the contraru,there are some people in favor of it.at the some time,they say if we are students,we will study in classroom,so time is very important for oneself.but teamwork is bad for our time.and now some students think ,in a class,they don't hope other one is best for oneself.
but in our class.one day,I don't know a paragraph's means.so we were in groups at school to asked other student.then,Iwere know this paragraph's means,and other student study more.
as far as I am concerned,I think we need tesmwork .teamwork shows us how other people's roles fit the purpose of the group and it is tsaches us to be patieut.so we should take a series of effevtive measures to teamwork.nothing is difficult if you put your heant into it.
先说明下,总分25分,我外语很差,所以看语法错误就.不过有很多句子都是之前背好了直接套的,大写打得很麻烦所以在这里是用的小写.
书面问题不大,我唯一能值得肯定的就是我的字了.（成绩悲剧生）
因为我是提前批志愿,而且有外语小分要求,但对完前面的答案离要求还差12分,所以请教了解打分情况的前辈们指点下（要是小分要求没达到,我就掉档了啊啊啊 ）
题目是湖北卷的题目差不多是（在学校里的合作teamwork）的意思.
一般批卷老师只看头一段和后一段再看看字数,一份卷子不会超过15秒!你的头一句就有错误单词,而且不应使用现在完成进行时!”day to day “表达不好,再看最后一句”heant “明显拼错了!本来是画龙点睛的一笔可这错的.不过字数够了,也未偏离题意分数应该能到8到9分,如果加上老师批卷的各种外界因素应该能打个12分以上