作业帮修改一段英文,改语病即可
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修改一段英文,改语病即可
Do you know my favorite cartoon?
Yes,it is Doraemon.
Maybe some of you think I’m childish,maybe some of you think Doraemon is a boring cartoon.So today I will tell you why I love Doraemon so much.
Doraemon is a faulty robot cat.He is very tenderhearted and always makes mistakes.He loves a kind of cake called “tongluoshao”.He hates mice and cold.He gets very angry when somebody calls him palm civet.He goes hot and cold when he sees beauty cat.He is so real that looks like a real person in real life.
Doraemon is a symbol of dream,wish and love.I am deeply impressed by every story about Doraemon.“I hope you won’t tie to me anymore.” “I hope you will live happily when I don’t accompany you.” When Doraemon says these sentences to Daxiong before he leaves for 22th century,when Daxiong fights with Panghu to set Doraemon’s heart at rest,I cried feelingly.
I believe,there’s a Doraemon in everybody’s heart.That Doraemon is called dream.
Do you know my favorite cartoon?
Yes,it is Doraemon.
Maybe some of you think I’m childish,maybe some of you think Doraemon is a boring cartoon.So today I will tell you why I love Doraemon so much.
Doraemon is a faulty robot cat.He is very tenderhearted and always makes mistakes.He loves a kind of cake called “tongluoshao”.He hates mice and cold.He gets very angry when somebody calls him palm civet.He goes hot and cold when he sees beauty cat.He is so real that looks like a real person in real life.
Doraemon is a symbol of dream,wish and love.I am deeply impressed by every story about Doraemon.“I hope you won’t tie to me anymore.” “I hope you will live happily when I don’t accompany you.” When Doraemon says these sentences to Daxiong before he leaves for 22th century,when Daxiong fights with Panghu to set Doraemon’s heart at rest,I cried feelingly.
I believe,there’s a Doraemon in everybody’s heart.That Doraemon is called dream.
第六行cold改为coldness
第七行beauty改为beautiful,cat改为cats比较好,或前面加个a
第七行最后一句,只是语病的话,looks前面加个he,不过这个句子实在太...不知道怎么形容
部分句子虽然没有语法错误,但是表达得比较不好（真实想法,请包涵）
哈哈,有点幼稚这篇文章,不过还好啦
第七行beauty改为beautiful,cat改为cats比较好,或前面加个a
第七行最后一句,只是语病的话,looks前面加个he,不过这个句子实在太...不知道怎么形容
部分句子虽然没有语法错误,但是表达得比较不好（真实想法,请包涵）
哈哈,有点幼稚这篇文章,不过还好啦