作业帮英文邮件,求语法挑错,修改词汇
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英文邮件,求语法挑错,修改词汇
I'm a big fan of XXX from China.I came to know about your in 2012.
In the PV,i think that you are so pretty,and especially cool!I like you and XXX very much.
Because of the my japanese is very poor so i can't express very well my total support and adoration for you .
I wishyour could do better and better in the future and i'm will alway be your biggist fan who pays attention to what you do all the time.
i sincerely hope that you can write me back.i will be waiting for you.
I'm a big fan of XXX from China.I came to know about your in 2012.
In the PV,i think that you are so pretty,and especially cool!I like you and XXX very much.
Because of the my japanese is very poor so i can't express very well my total support and adoration for you .
I wishyour could do better and better in the future and i'm will alway be your biggist fan who pays attention to what you do all the time.
i sincerely hope that you can write me back.i will be waiting for you.
/>I'm a big fan of XXX from China.I came to know about your in 2012.（your-you)
In the <XXX> PV,i think that you are so pretty,and especially cool!I like you and XXX very much. (此句不通顺,用so ...that可能改善点）
Because of the my japanese is very poor so i can't express very well my total support and adoration for you .( because 与so 不能连用,二者必须删除一个；because of 后面跟的是短语,because 后面才是跟句子的；japanese首字母大写；老外最不喜欢中国人说自己语言poor）
I wish your could do better and better in the future and i'm will alway be your biggist fan who pays attention to what you do all the time.(第一个your-you; i'm-I; alway-always; biggist-biggest)
i sincerely hope that you can write me back.i will be waiting for you.(期待某人的来信习惯用looking forward to hearing from you.)
其实我建议你重写,文章很别扭.
再问： 能否请你按照我的思路写一篇呢？
再答： 如果这是写给你偶像的邮件，我觉得直接用你自己的语言会更真实，人家读的是你的诚意不是你的英语水平，努力用自己的语言去表达，不要在乎写得好不好，加油！
再问： 是作业好吗……
再答： 汗流浃背，童鞋哎，作业要自己做的好不好，词典呀，单词呀去翻翻嘛
In the <XXX> PV,i think that you are so pretty,and especially cool!I like you and XXX very much. (此句不通顺,用so ...that可能改善点）
Because of the my japanese is very poor so i can't express very well my total support and adoration for you .( because 与so 不能连用,二者必须删除一个；because of 后面跟的是短语,because 后面才是跟句子的；japanese首字母大写；老外最不喜欢中国人说自己语言poor）
I wish your could do better and better in the future and i'm will alway be your biggist fan who pays attention to what you do all the time.(第一个your-you; i'm-I; alway-always; biggist-biggest)
i sincerely hope that you can write me back.i will be waiting for you.(期待某人的来信习惯用looking forward to hearing from you.)
其实我建议你重写,文章很别扭.
再问： 能否请你按照我的思路写一篇呢？
再答： 如果这是写给你偶像的邮件，我觉得直接用你自己的语言会更真实，人家读的是你的诚意不是你的英语水平，努力用自己的语言去表达，不要在乎写得好不好，加油！
再问： 是作业好吗……
再答： 汗流浃背，童鞋哎，作业要自己做的好不好，词典呀，单词呀去翻翻嘛