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求英语高手修改作文!In the morning,I got up at seven o' clock.I ate Zo

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求英语高手修改作文!
In the morning,I got up at seven o' clock.I ate Zombi and a bowl of milk.Then,I went to English teacher's house by bus.But,English teacher had gone go to school.So,I come back home.
In the evening,my father with I played tennis on the playground.
把时间放在开头的句子是典型的中国式英语.
牛奶不能用吃的,要用喝的
the english teacher
but后不用逗号
but 后的english teacher 应该用he 或she 代替,此处重复
has gone to school
went back home