作业帮一篇简单的初一英语作文,进来看下有什么错误,
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一篇简单的初一英语作文,进来看下有什么错误,
January 30th is my mother’s birthyday.not long ago,she had her forty-second birthday with my family.
First,my sister and me gave her some good gifts——I gave her a portrait of her,my sister gave her a birthday card.She liked them very much!
Then in noon,my family had a delicious lunch at“ChuanYu family”restaurant,uncle spent money for lunch!He said with a smile:“happy birthday to my sister!”
Last,in evening,my father gave her a bunch of roses.What a surprise gift!My mother said:“I never spent such a happy day.Thank you very much!”
January 30th is my mother’s birthyday.not long ago,she had her forty-second birthday with my family.
First,my sister and me gave her some good gifts——I gave her a portrait of her,my sister gave her a birthday card.She liked them very much!
Then in noon,my family had a delicious lunch at“ChuanYu family”restaurant,uncle spent money for lunch!He said with a smile:“happy birthday to my sister!”
Last,in evening,my father gave her a bunch of roses.What a surprise gift!My mother said:“I never spent such a happy day.Thank you very much!”
第一句既然是not long ago,怎么能用is in noon不对,应该是at noon.
spent money for不对,应该是spent money on.
in evening,不对,是in the evening.
spent such a happy day不对,是have never had.
一定要给我,累呢
spent money for不对,应该是spent money on.
in evening,不对,是in the evening.
spent such a happy day不对,是have never had.
一定要给我,累呢