第一句是开头,固定的,要求内容概括到1.argue with parents 2.can't sleep well be

第一句是开头,固定的,要求内容概括到1.argue with parents 2.can't sleep well before exams 3.feel lonely
Recently I've had a discussion with my classmates about our problems."My parents think that I often argue with them,what should I do?"Many students may ask like this.I think we can have a talk with parents,to understand each other,or it will git in the way of your study.Can't sleep well before exams is also a big problem.It will anxious about grades.Maybe we can listen to the music before go sleep.What about feel longly?It's a big problem.It will outen makes you fell down>Try to talk with your friends!

Many students may ask like this——我觉得改成 Many students may have such problems.比较好
I think we can have a talk with parents,to understand each other,——I think we can talk with our parents to help understand each other well.最好不要用,to……,的形式
or it will git in the way of your study——没看懂你想说什么.
Can't sleep well before exams is also a big problem.——用一个连接词衔接一下会比较好,Besides, some students may have sleeping problems that they can not sleep well before exams.
It will anxious about grades.——这有语法错误.will后面要跟动词,anxious 是形容词,We may be anxious about the marks (你是想说分数吗?）and the rankings.
Maybe we can listen to the music before go sleep.——before后面要跟进行式,before going to sleep
What about feel longly——what about后面也要跟进行式,How about feeling lonely?
It will outen makes you fell down——will后面跟原型,make sb +原型, It will often make you feel disappointed(你是想说失落吗?)
改后的全文是：
Recently I've had a discussion with my classmates about our problems."My parents think that I often argue with them,what should I do?" Many students may have such problems.I think we can talk with our parents to help understand each other well. Besides, some students may have sleeping problems that we can not sleep well before exams. May be anxious about the marks and the rankings.If that possible, try to listen to the music before going to sleep. How about feeling lonely, which is also a big problem to us. It will make us feel disappointed sometimes. My suggestion is to share the happiness and sadness with friends.
PS：个人意见,仅供参考,我也不清楚你大概是什么年级的,这属于比较基本的