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这两句话有错吗?Kate,one of us,played an increasingly important role

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这两句话有错吗?
Kate,one of us,played an increasingly important role in
the Single’s day that called her boyfriend and told him that they just broke up
for one day in order to satisfy the needs of Single’s Day.
I will never forget
the day when we four girls
reach an absolute consensus on having a special day on thecoming Single’s Day.
个人意见请参考;
第一句话,你用that引导定语从句是错误的,因为先行词和动作执行内容不一致,不妨改成:Kate,one of us,played an increasingly important role in the Single’s day and she called her boyfriend and told him that they just broke up for one day in order to satisfy the need of Single’s Day.(need是不需要加“s”的)
第二句话 will never forget the day when we four girls reach an absolute consensus on having a special day with the coming of Single“s Day.