请会英文的帮我改下以下句子英文语法和排版一下

请会英文的帮我改下以下句子英文语法和排版一下
请会英文的帮我改下以下句子英文语法和排版一下
有些句子我写的怪怪的 请帮我整理一下句子&可以补充些句子 让我的句子更通顺 和 修改句子文法
For me,perception is a particular way of
understanding different kinds of things and it can be an ability to notice
something by seeing ,hearing,smelling etc..i think the perception is very
important in our daily life.Especially for the educator,to take care of
children ,the educator have to know what they think ,how they feels etc in
order to help children solve their problems.
In our daily life ,we can analyze people's
personality using perception to find out the answer ,for example,to observe
the people’s appearance and action to analyze ,if a person always put his head
down to talk with peoples ,and not face to face.Then this person’s action
show us that he is a very shy person and
maybe he is not good at talking to peoples etc.even just a small piece cake(nothing)
we still can find some special things in our daily life,just using the
perception.
In my
experience at daily life,I using the perception to face many different kinds
of things,for example,I always look at peoples faces,in order to guess what they
were thinking,or maybe thought their actions to guess what’ were happened…questions

To me,perception is a particular way to understand different kinds of object.It can be the ability to recognize an apple,to notice one's feeling or to appreciate musics.Thus,perception ability is a very important tool in daily life,especially to an educator.
In order to taking good care of children,and solving their problems,an educator has to understand their thoughts and feelings.Through observations on students' apperance and behaviors,a teacher gains understandings of their personalities and provides helps accordingly.
For example,a girl doesn't like to face other people,seldom talks.A teacher can deduce that she is shy and have diffculties making friends.
先不说文法,思路也有问题
1.perception这个字眼的理解似乎有点问题,因此第一段例子被在下改成了认得一个苹果、欣赏音乐、察觉他人感觉
2.文章主旨是什麼?上面那两段改成那样子,整篇文章主旨已经被我硬生生地改成perception ability is a very important tool to an educator.
3.下面两段都是在指一样的东西,即观察人的行为表情,应放同一段?当然还是文章主旨不清的原因,在下实在写不下、改不下了.
再问： .perception 不是洞察力 观察的意思吗 我有想错吗 拜托 那请至少帮我排版一下句子吧
再答： Perception 的确有洞察的意思，但亦有观念、知觉、看法的意思，套上阁下的句子，基本上都解得通，因此，为免产生岐义，洞察力的话一般用上 insight, 或discernment 皆指清楚理解人或情况的能力 用了insight一下子重新做了删改，看看如何..(第三段字数限制关系放不上，追问补回) To me, to have insight is to have the ability to see and understand people, things, or situations clearly and intelligently. It can be the ability to notice a clue(线索), to catch a lie or to recognize a problem. I believe having great insights is very important in our daily life. In educational setting, an insightful (富有洞察力的)educator can help the students better. For example, a girl seldom (很少)talks and dislikes looking at other people. An insightful teacher notices her shyness and will try solving her problem by having her to join group activities. Therefore, having great insight gives educators better tools to help their students.
再问： 谢谢 拜托了
再答： In social settings, having insight can improve(改善) social relationships. In my experience, people's facial expression (面部表情) can tell us something about them. By looking at their face, I could get a glance of their thoughts and problems. Then I can response(反应) to those feelings accordingly.
再问： 若用你的句子的话 perception 解释行不通吗?
再答： 不是不可以..建议更改还是因为perception字义多(至少四个)，而且每个差距很大; 而insight, discernment等字则没有这个问题~ 若真要更改的话，要小心注意一下，perception 本身是较中性的字眼，而insight本身则多是较正向的，因此修改需加上形容词 但第一段那个属解释，因此不用~To me, to have insight is to have the ability... => To me, perception is to the ability.... 其他则改为如 an insightful (富有洞察力的)educator ..=> a highly perceptive educator having insight can improve(改善) social relationships => having great perception can improve(改善) social relationships