作业帮求英语高手帮忙修改我的英语演讲稿!大一水平
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求英语高手帮忙修改我的英语演讲稿!大一水平
How did you enjoy your summer holiday
Good morning everybody!I’m XXX from class 12.It's my honor to speak here,and give you a speech.Then today I'd like to talk something about my summer holiday.
I think I’m a lucky guy because I did not go to school since month 4,so I had a longer summer vacation than other guys.During this long holiday the most meaningful things I did was that I had a journey.And that also was my first journey.
The place I traveled named Beijing whose history and cultural are indeed deep.This journey lasted a week.We went to the great wall,the forbidden city,the summer palace and the imperial college and other places of historic interest scenic beauty like any visitors did.There are so many beauties that surprised me.Besides enjoyed the beauty we also enjoyed the gourmet food.We had a wonderful dinner in Quanjude whose Beijing roast duck is known far and wide.And we also enjoyed other signs snakes like Candied Haw in a Stick.I think this traditional food is delicious and attractive.
From this journey I not only gained knowledge about the old history but also learned many truth from it.For example when I climbed the great wall I learned I must insist on when I faced difficulties.Only in this way can we succeed.And I also learned it’s our responsibility to protect the historical heritage.
This journey not only enrichs my holiday but also opened my eyes.
Finally,thank you for your listening,that’s all.
大致意思就是介绍我的暑假,然后我希望有英语高手帮我修改一下,那些语法错误,中式英语都能改掉,尽量美式一点.还有就是希望能增加点高级英语单词,复合句,词组之类的,总之就是希望显得有内涵一点.时长控制在2分钟,可以适当的帮我删掉点或加几句.如果这里发不下,可以把修改好的演讲稿发到我的邮箱yaoyao588888@yahoo.cn
How did you enjoy your summer holiday
Good morning everybody!I’m XXX from class 12.It's my honor to speak here,and give you a speech.Then today I'd like to talk something about my summer holiday.
I think I’m a lucky guy because I did not go to school since month 4,so I had a longer summer vacation than other guys.During this long holiday the most meaningful things I did was that I had a journey.And that also was my first journey.
The place I traveled named Beijing whose history and cultural are indeed deep.This journey lasted a week.We went to the great wall,the forbidden city,the summer palace and the imperial college and other places of historic interest scenic beauty like any visitors did.There are so many beauties that surprised me.Besides enjoyed the beauty we also enjoyed the gourmet food.We had a wonderful dinner in Quanjude whose Beijing roast duck is known far and wide.And we also enjoyed other signs snakes like Candied Haw in a Stick.I think this traditional food is delicious and attractive.
From this journey I not only gained knowledge about the old history but also learned many truth from it.For example when I climbed the great wall I learned I must insist on when I faced difficulties.Only in this way can we succeed.And I also learned it’s our responsibility to protect the historical heritage.
This journey not only enrichs my holiday but also opened my eyes.
Finally,thank you for your listening,that’s all.
大致意思就是介绍我的暑假,然后我希望有英语高手帮我修改一下,那些语法错误,中式英语都能改掉,尽量美式一点.还有就是希望能增加点高级英语单词,复合句,词组之类的,总之就是希望显得有内涵一点.时长控制在2分钟,可以适当的帮我删掉点或加几句.如果这里发不下,可以把修改好的演讲稿发到我的邮箱yaoyao588888@yahoo.cn
1..It's my honor to speak here, and give you a speech. Then today I'd like to talk something about my summer holiday.改为It's my great honor to stand here and give you a speech.Today i'd like to share something about my summer holiday.
2. 第二段改为i'm a lucky guy, i think, i had been absent from school since April, so i had a longer summer vacation than other guys.During the long holiday, the most meaningful thing i did was that i had a joyful journey which was my first journey with my family.
3. We traveled Beijing which had a long history and rich culture. The journey lasted a week. IWe visited the Great wall, the Forbidden city, the Summer Palace, the Imperial College and other places of historic interest scenic beauty like other visitors did. I was impressed on so many beautiful scenery. Besides this, i also enjoyed famous speciality of Beijing food. We had a wonderful dinner in Quanjude whose Beijing roast duck was known far and wide. Also, Candied Haws on a stick, which attracted me most was also one kind of distinctive food.
4.After this journey, I not only gained knowledge about the old history but also learned many truth. For example, when climbing the Great Wall, I learned we should insist on when we faced difficulties. Only in this way can we succeed. In addition to this, it’s our responsibility to protect the historical heritage.
This journey not only enrichs my holiday but also broadens my horizon.
Finally,thanks for your attention. That’s all.
2. 第二段改为i'm a lucky guy, i think, i had been absent from school since April, so i had a longer summer vacation than other guys.During the long holiday, the most meaningful thing i did was that i had a joyful journey which was my first journey with my family.
3. We traveled Beijing which had a long history and rich culture. The journey lasted a week. IWe visited the Great wall, the Forbidden city, the Summer Palace, the Imperial College and other places of historic interest scenic beauty like other visitors did. I was impressed on so many beautiful scenery. Besides this, i also enjoyed famous speciality of Beijing food. We had a wonderful dinner in Quanjude whose Beijing roast duck was known far and wide. Also, Candied Haws on a stick, which attracted me most was also one kind of distinctive food.
4.After this journey, I not only gained knowledge about the old history but also learned many truth. For example, when climbing the Great Wall, I learned we should insist on when we faced difficulties. Only in this way can we succeed. In addition to this, it’s our responsibility to protect the historical heritage.
This journey not only enrichs my holiday but also broadens my horizon.
Finally,thanks for your attention. That’s all.