谁能帮我修改下这个英语作文呀?
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谁能帮我修改下这个英语作文呀?
welcome to our club
Hello,boys and girls,our is sports club,we want every one can love and enjoy in the sports club.
why did enjoy our sports club?As far as I am concerned.I find for reasons .First,you can choose you are crazy about sports.Sports can make you change sotrong and health.Second,boys are able
to strong body and be full of interesting at class after time.Our sport club have interseting march.If you like you can enjoy it.At sports club you can recognition many beautiful girs,your can talk about everthing.Third,an fo girls,sports club is wonderful choose.Recetly,the problem of lostweight has aroused everybody's concern.Girls can choose lovely sports.Not only becom more and more confidence,in yourself stature and be able to lostweight,but also become so beautiful.
How to enjoy to our sports club?It's so simple,you only write sonme basic siple infermation and bring one photo.If you have tinteresting our club please hurry up ,come on!
welcome to our club
Hello,boys and girls,our is sports club,we want every one can love and enjoy in the sports club.
why did enjoy our sports club?As far as I am concerned.I find for reasons .First,you can choose you are crazy about sports.Sports can make you change sotrong and health.Second,boys are able
to strong body and be full of interesting at class after time.Our sport club have interseting march.If you like you can enjoy it.At sports club you can recognition many beautiful girs,your can talk about everthing.Third,an fo girls,sports club is wonderful choose.Recetly,the problem of lostweight has aroused everybody's concern.Girls can choose lovely sports.Not only becom more and more confidence,in yourself stature and be able to lostweight,but also become so beautiful.
How to enjoy to our sports club?It's so simple,you only write sonme basic siple infermation and bring one photo.If you have tinteresting our club please hurry up ,come on!
welcome to our club
Hello,boys and girls,ourS is sports club,we want every one TO love and enjoy in the sports club.
why DO YOU enjoy our sports club?As far as I am concerned. I find SOME reasons .First,you can choose THE sports YOU ARE CRAZY ABOUT. Sports can make you STRONG and healthY. SecondLY,boys are able
to HAVE strong bodIES and TO be full of interest at class.Our sport club haS interseting marchES. If you like, you can enjoy it.At sports club you can MEET many beautiful girs, your can talk about everthing.ThirdLY, girls,sports club is A wonderful choICE.Recetly,the problem of lostweight has aroused everybody's concern.Girls can choose lovely sports.YOU CAN Not only becomE more and more confidenT to losE weight,but also become so beautiful.
How to JOIN our sports club?It's so simple.ALL you NEED IS only TO write some basic siMple infOrmation and bring one photo.If you have INTEREST IN our club, please hurry up.Come on!
Hello,boys and girls,ourS is sports club,we want every one TO love and enjoy in the sports club.
why DO YOU enjoy our sports club?As far as I am concerned. I find SOME reasons .First,you can choose THE sports YOU ARE CRAZY ABOUT. Sports can make you STRONG and healthY. SecondLY,boys are able
to HAVE strong bodIES and TO be full of interest at class.Our sport club haS interseting marchES. If you like, you can enjoy it.At sports club you can MEET many beautiful girs, your can talk about everthing.ThirdLY, girls,sports club is A wonderful choICE.Recetly,the problem of lostweight has aroused everybody's concern.Girls can choose lovely sports.YOU CAN Not only becomE more and more confidenT to losE weight,but also become so beautiful.
How to JOIN our sports club?It's so simple.ALL you NEED IS only TO write some basic siMple infOrmation and bring one photo.If you have INTEREST IN our club, please hurry up.Come on!