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nowadays,it is hard to imagine how often you are a victim of

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nowadays,it is hard to imagine how often you are a victim of traffic jam.as is shown in the picture
How busy the traffic is.The busy traffic makes our road become smaller.therefore,it is easy to know that the busy traffic is a serious problem.
there are many facters contributing to this problem.with the development of our country,more and more people like buy cars.every one likes to drive their own cars to some place where they want to go.
as far as i am concerned`.
这篇作文只有15分,怎么样改才能得到20分呢,什么样的作文才算好呢,我想提高作文水平,请高手帮我改改,什么样的作文老师喜欢,大家给点意见.
How busy the traffic is.The busy traffic makes our road become smaller(改为crowded).therefore,it is easy to know that the busy traffic is a serious problem.
there are many facters contributing to this problem.with the development of our country,more and more people like buy cars.every one likes to drive their( his ) own cars (car)to some place(places) where they want to go.
as far as i am concerned`.
再问: 能不能给点比较好的句子呢,我们老师常说什么好的句子用在作文里,给点比较复杂的倒装啊,非限制性···强调句型啊··········拜托啦:-D