Please help!Essay Writing!

Please help!Essay Writing!
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.
In the past,there were many differences when people traveled to other countries.Nowadays,there were many similarity between cultures all over the world.What are the possible causes in this increasing similarity?Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this phenomenon?
You should use your own ideas,knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.
这是去年的题了 求一个比较标准的答案

Recently,globalization has been in the limelight.A good example of this is traveling in other countries,we would find many differences,including food,dressing style,and custom and so on in the past,however,these differences are not so obviously today.
With the development of science and technology,world has become a so-called global village.A rapid development of Internet even make cultural related to every corner of the world.As a result,some people argue that the increasing similarities of the whole world will break the distinguishing feature between different countries.
However,globalization's advantages,to my mind,are far outweighing of its disadvantages.
Firstly,globalization can bring new technologies and people of talent to different developing countries and make the rural areas enhance.Secondly,globalization bring us a convenient life,we don't need to fly to taste a bottle of time-honored red wine spend 20 hours to France any more.Finally,globalization gives rise to a smaller world.We’ve got a chance to know everyone all over the world.
Taking what I’ve mentioned into consideration,I strongly convince that globalization is the power sources for the increasing similarities of the world and after years of practice,it definitely proved its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.