作业帮我想问问有什麼英文文法要更改.谢谢
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我想问问有什麼英文文法要更改.谢谢
Sunday,2nd September.2014Writing the note is being my habit from beginning today, because i want to study the english,so i seach the internet what how to do. Today i watched two NBA's games in the internet, although i did't know what they say ,but i was very enjoy this process,one of the games was Chicago versus Minnesota.Chicago is my favorite team,because there is a player of the youngest of NBA,his name call Derribe Rose ,he got the MVP award for twenty-two years old , he has a driving string and a great speed just like a bull, the teller usually say him too fast,too stong,too good,it is excited to watch his competition, though he has not attend the game,but the game won by Chicago. Today i have doing the english practise in the internet, read 2 story,then i go to play the basketball about five o'clock ,seven forty-five return home.
Sunday,2nd September.2014Writing the note is being my habit from beginning today, because i want to study the english,so i seach the internet what how to do. Today i watched two NBA's games in the internet, although i did't know what they say ,but i was very enjoy this process,one of the games was Chicago versus Minnesota.Chicago is my favorite team,because there is a player of the youngest of NBA,his name call Derribe Rose ,he got the MVP award for twenty-two years old , he has a driving string and a great speed just like a bull, the teller usually say him too fast,too stong,too good,it is excited to watch his competition, though he has not attend the game,but the game won by Chicago. Today i have doing the english practise in the internet, read 2 story,then i go to play the basketball about five o'clock ,seven forty-five return home.
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再问： 那该怎样写 帮帮我
再答： 别再写了, 多多读别人的, 多多念念别人的再说!
再问： 那该怎样写 帮帮我
再答： 别再写了, 多多读别人的, 多多念念别人的再说!