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各位大虾帮忙看下我这英语文章有没有错误,
My last weekend
I finished school and went home in last Friday afternoon.In Friday evening,I did my homework.Than,I went to bed.
Second day,I got up early and had breakfast.My breakfast was egg and milk.How delicious!After breakfast,I went to park with my father.We flew the kite.At ten 10:30,we went home.In afternoon,I watched basketball match.I liked NBA and Houston Rockets.Tracy Mcgrady was my favourite star.
In Sunday,I read a novel called Haidiliangwanli.It was interesting.In evening,I went to bed early.
It was a happy weekend!
My last weekend
I finished school and went home last Friday afternoon.On Friday evening,I did my homework.Then,I went to bed.
The second day,I got up early and had breakfast.My breakfast was an egg and some milk.How delicious!After breakfast,I went to the park with my father.We flew the kite.At 10:30,we went home.In the afternoon,I watched a basketball match.I liked NBA and Houston Rockets.Tracy Mcgrady was my favourite star.
On Sunday,I read a novel called Haidiliangwanli.It was interesting.In the evening,I went to bed early.
It was a happy weekend!