作业帮谁能帮我修改一下这封英语邮件,
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谁能帮我修改一下这封英语邮件,
Ms.***
I really appreciate that you let me enroll at *** University in Spring.I have sent the scanned paper of my IELTS score as attachment in this e-mail.
But the problem is that I probably can not arrive at Miami University tomorrow.Is that ok if I arrive on Thursday or Friday?And since *** University is in a town,so I must get a flight to the Cincinati Airport.I am wondering that your offer pick-up service or not.
In addition,can you give me some directions for paying tuition.
I look forward to study at ***.Thanks a lot for your help.
Ms.***
I really appreciate that you let me enroll at *** University in Spring.I have sent the scanned paper of my IELTS score as attachment in this e-mail.
But the problem is that I probably can not arrive at Miami University tomorrow.Is that ok if I arrive on Thursday or Friday?And since *** University is in a town,so I must get a flight to the Cincinati Airport.I am wondering that your offer pick-up service or not.
In addition,can you give me some directions for paying tuition.
I look forward to study at ***.Thanks a lot for your help.
Ms.***
I really appreciate that you enroll me as a student of *** University in spring of 2010.The scanned paper of my IELTS scores has been scanned and attached to this e-mail.
But I'm afraid there's still a problem that I'm not able to arrive at Miami University tomorrow.Is that ok if I arrive on Thursday or Friday?Also since your University locates in a town,and my plane land only on the Cincinati Airport,I am wondering if your could kindly arrange a pick-up service for me?
Besides,I'll be much appreciated if you could help me in how to pay the tuitions!
Looking forward to studying at ***.Thanks a lot for your help.
总体来说楼主还是有点Chinguish,不过还好啦,加油啦,尤其你要去外国学习呢~
I really appreciate that you enroll me as a student of *** University in spring of 2010.The scanned paper of my IELTS scores has been scanned and attached to this e-mail.
But I'm afraid there's still a problem that I'm not able to arrive at Miami University tomorrow.Is that ok if I arrive on Thursday or Friday?Also since your University locates in a town,and my plane land only on the Cincinati Airport,I am wondering if your could kindly arrange a pick-up service for me?
Besides,I'll be much appreciated if you could help me in how to pay the tuitions!
Looking forward to studying at ***.Thanks a lot for your help.
总体来说楼主还是有点Chinguish,不过还好啦,加油啦,尤其你要去外国学习呢~