求雅思复议过的人帮我看下写的复议申请信是否符合要求

求雅思复议过的人帮我看下写的复议申请信是否符合要求
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is XXX. I took part in the IELTS test (Academic Training) on 03-27-2010 in your centre for the purpose of pursuing the undergraduate diploma abroad. 61546 is my candidate number. I am writing to apply for the reassessment of my speaking test results.
As pre-requisites of profession assessment, I was informed that I have to take an IELTS test and reach at least level 5.5 on all four components by a university. However, my speaking is only at 3.5. I have been prepared the IELTS for nearly one year. I talked to native speaker (from England) in English everyday at least 2 hours in the past year. I think my English speaking should have reached at level 6. My poor score of speaking maybe is due to little nervous during the beginning of speaking test, after all i got 5.5 band score in my first time to take part in the speaking test of IELTS on 12-19-2009 and my score is only 3.5 during the second time. Also my writing band score seems not reasonable. Personally, i think my writing score is at least 5 . I will lose the golden opportunity of applying the good reputation university if I wait for three months for the next test. Therefore, I will appreciate if my speaking part to be remarked. Enclosed are my original test results and the payment for this application.
Any helps from you will greatly be appreciated.
Regards.
帮我看下 哪里有错误的 语法有没错的 还有这样子要求 是否可行.谢谢了

用签字笔写,centre name是你考试地点的拼音,要大写
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