作业帮求英语达人帮忙修改英文句子!
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求英语达人帮忙修改英文句子!
1.In Nikos Kazantakis’s short story “A night in a Calabrian Village”,I learned that helping others will let both feel thankful.
2.The protagonist is from Greece,so he became a stranger in Italy.
3.Because rained all day long,it was cold night outside that make the protagonist feel cold,wet,tired and hungry.
4.The protagonist wants to have a place to sleep for a night.
5.Before he came here,his grandpa always look for strangers and bring them home,so he thought everyone will be as same as his grandpa,he wasn’t scared to come to Italy.
6.Actually when he came to Italy he feels really upset,because no one would be friendly to take a stranger home.
这六句话是我自己写的一段完整段落.亲们,帮我把每句的错误都找找吧,有些是病句,有些是大小写问题,选词不当,语法,标点符号,长短句等.亲们帮我找找吧,越多越好.在word里只找到几个,老师却说有很多.
1.In Nikos Kazantakis’s short story “A night in a Calabrian Village”,I learned that helping others will let both feel thankful.
2.The protagonist is from Greece,so he became a stranger in Italy.
3.Because rained all day long,it was cold night outside that make the protagonist feel cold,wet,tired and hungry.
4.The protagonist wants to have a place to sleep for a night.
5.Before he came here,his grandpa always look for strangers and bring them home,so he thought everyone will be as same as his grandpa,he wasn’t scared to come to Italy.
6.Actually when he came to Italy he feels really upset,because no one would be friendly to take a stranger home.
这六句话是我自己写的一段完整段落.亲们,帮我把每句的错误都找找吧,有些是病句,有些是大小写问题,选词不当,语法,标点符号,长短句等.亲们帮我找找吧,越多越好.在word里只找到几个,老师却说有很多.
1. In Nikos Kazantakis's short story,A Night In a Calabrian Village, I learned that helping can make people
appreciate each other.
2. The protagonist came from Greece, so he was a stranger in Italy.
3. It rained all day, so the protagonist felt cold, wet and tired in the cold night.（我把hungry去掉了,因为这是个多余的词.你提到下雨了,所以这个人觉得冷、潮湿和累是可以的,但是你说饿,就让人觉得跟下雨没关系）.
4. The protagonist wanted to have a place to sleep in the night.
5. Before he came here, his grandfather always looked for strangers and brought them to home, and he thought everyone was as his grandfather, so he wasn't scared when he came to Italy.
6. Actually, when he came to Italy, he felt very upset because nobody wanted to take a stranger to their home.
改了很多,累死了... 亲,多给点分吧.
appreciate each other.
2. The protagonist came from Greece, so he was a stranger in Italy.
3. It rained all day, so the protagonist felt cold, wet and tired in the cold night.（我把hungry去掉了,因为这是个多余的词.你提到下雨了,所以这个人觉得冷、潮湿和累是可以的,但是你说饿,就让人觉得跟下雨没关系）.
4. The protagonist wanted to have a place to sleep in the night.
5. Before he came here, his grandfather always looked for strangers and brought them to home, and he thought everyone was as his grandfather, so he wasn't scared when he came to Italy.
6. Actually, when he came to Italy, he felt very upset because nobody wanted to take a stranger to their home.
改了很多,累死了... 亲,多给点分吧.