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求找这篇英语作文的错误!
“Where there is a will, there is a way” is an proverb that we all know and understand ,but in our life we hardly ever carry that out for seldom of us can really understand the power of will.
There is no great work that can be performed without will .Great projects such as great wall and Tai Mahal ,both of them cost long time and a large amout of money to build .So it is with human beings ,once a man owns a strong will ,it is believe that he would succeed some day .Steve Jobs ,a Successful man with great achievement ,faced lots of diffculties and failure ,but he never gave up even if Apple company once dismissed him .With his strong will he stand up and become a man who is respectable .
If you mind up your mind to do something and stick to that ,anything diffcult in front you can be a easy case
“Where there is a will, there is a way” is an proverb that we all know and understand ,but in our life we hardly ever carry that out for seldom of us can really understand the power of will.
There is no great work that can be performed without will .Great projects such as great wall and Tai Mahal ,both of them cost long time and a large amout of money to build .So it is with human beings ,once a man owns a strong will ,it is believe that he would succeed some day .Steve Jobs ,a Successful man with great achievement ,faced lots of diffculties and failure ,but he never gave up even if Apple company once dismissed him .With his strong will he stand up and become a man who is respectable .
If you mind up your mind to do something and stick to that ,anything diffcult in front you can be a easy case
长城不是great wall而是The Great Wall
cost 改为costed 因为是过去式
a large amout of改为a large amount of
owns改为has
it is believe 改为it is believed
stand up 改为stood up
make up your mind
stick to that改为stick to it
cost 改为costed 因为是过去式
a large amout of改为a large amount of
owns改为has
it is believe 改为it is believed
stand up 改为stood up
make up your mind
stick to that改为stick to it