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英语改错〈3〉 total 50pts

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英语改错〈3〉 total 50pts
Since English grammar is so hard..
also this is most important part..so be careful..bowing~
correcting all errors in the use of verbs,pronouns,and modifiers(I think there are about 8 errors total):
Jean laffite was a frenchman whom became a smuggler and a pirate along the coast of New Orleans in the early 1800s.He and his brother raid Spainsh and neutral ships in the Gulf of Mexico with a fleet of ships at his command.In 1814 when the British were at war with the United States,the wanted him to help the attack New Orleans.However,he choosed to in form the United States of the British plans and offer their services to fight against england.Laffite fighted under General Andrew Jackson in the Battle of New Orleans.Although he receved a pardon from President Madison,Laddite returen to a life of piracy.
thx a lot
Jean laffite was a frenchman(Frenchman) whom(who) became a smuggler and a (a去掉)pirate along the coast of New Orleans in the early 1800s. He and his brother raid Spainsh and neutral ships in the Gulf of Mexico with a fleet of ships at his command. In 1814 when the British were at war with the United States, the (they) wanted him to help the (to)attack New Orleans. However,he choosed chose)to in form (inform是一个词)the United States of the British plans and offer their services to fight against england. Laffite fighted (fought )under General Andrew Jackson in the Battle of New Orleans. Although he receved (After he received)a pardon from President Madison, Laddite returen to a life of piracy.
大概就是这样,但里头单词拼写错误严重,国家名开头字母要大写