作业帮求批改剑8 test4的小作文
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求批改剑8 test4的小作文
The line graph below indicates the quantities of freights transported in the Britain from 1974 to 2002 by four different modes of transport.
In 1974,there were about 70 million tonnes of freights transported by road,and the number increased slowly to around 82 in 1991,after that it saw a falling trend until 1995,and it rised sharply to almost 100 in 2002.It is obvious that road was the most popular transportation.
Remotely following were water and rail.From 1974 to 1978,the amount of goods tranported by water and rail remained stable around 40 million tonnes.After that,transported by water became more popular and the amount of goods tranported by water ended approximately 65 million tonnes in 2002.On the other hand,amount of goods tranported by rail decreased from 1978 to 1995,and bottomed at about 30 million tonnes in 1995,after that the number rised to more than 40.
Pipeline seems like the least popular transportation in the UK.Although it saw a rising trend during that period,but due to only less than 10 million tonnes' freight tranported by pipeline in 1974,it ended only around 22 million tonnes in 2002.
To sum up,we can tell that increasing goods were tranported in the UK between 1974 and 2002.
The line graph below indicates the quantities of freights transported in the Britain from 1974 to 2002 by four different modes of transport.
In 1974,there were about 70 million tonnes of freights transported by road,and the number increased slowly to around 82 in 1991,after that it saw a falling trend until 1995,and it rised sharply to almost 100 in 2002.It is obvious that road was the most popular transportation.
Remotely following were water and rail.From 1974 to 1978,the amount of goods tranported by water and rail remained stable around 40 million tonnes.After that,transported by water became more popular and the amount of goods tranported by water ended approximately 65 million tonnes in 2002.On the other hand,amount of goods tranported by rail decreased from 1978 to 1995,and bottomed at about 30 million tonnes in 1995,after that the number rised to more than 40.
Pipeline seems like the least popular transportation in the UK.Although it saw a rising trend during that period,but due to only less than 10 million tonnes' freight tranported by pipeline in 1974,it ended only around 22 million tonnes in 2002.
To sum up,we can tell that increasing goods were tranported in the UK between 1974 and 2002.
ottomed at 应该是bottomed out at
还不错的,描述的很详细.但是句式还可以更加丰富,可以用定语从句.还有首句改写不可以仅仅换单词的.
可以这么改写：the line chat illustrates how quantities of goods were transported in UK from 1974 to 2002 through four main modes of transport.
如果要打分的话是6.5
还不错的,描述的很详细.但是句式还可以更加丰富,可以用定语从句.还有首句改写不可以仅仅换单词的.
可以这么改写：the line chat illustrates how quantities of goods were transported in UK from 1974 to 2002 through four main modes of transport.
如果要打分的话是6.5