作业帮批改 GRE Argument 作文
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批改 GRE Argument 作文
..我就贴了一段,后面写的风格差不多...全文550字,25min写完的.第一次写,没经验,
Firstly,the author mentioned that there is ariver between Palean village and “ancient village”.Based on this truth,the auther assumed thatvillager cannot cross the river because there were no boats.However,he failed to depict the picture of the environmentof the Brim River in the prehistoric time.Maybe during that period,this river was broad but not deep,or thisriver was deep but not broad,or even there was no river that time.Thus,people in the Palea village can goacross the "Brim River" without any obstruction.Thus,thesepossibilities pale the auther’s arbitrary speculation.To make the author's words more convincing,he needs to provide us the exact geographic circumstance during that period.To say the least,even during the prehistoric time,there was avery broad and deep river,the author cannot simply assume that without boats Paleanpeople cannot go through the Brim River.One possible explanation is that during that time,people can swimacross that river.The alternativepossibility is that maybe boats from other country travelledhere and brought baskets across the Brim River for thecommercial need.Or even when there came a winter,people can go across this riverafter ice formed beyond the river.Tosupport this assumption,the author needs to rule out the possibility above atleast.
..我就贴了一段,后面写的风格差不多...全文550字,25min写完的.第一次写,没经验,
Firstly,the author mentioned that there is ariver between Palean village and “ancient village”.Based on this truth,the auther assumed thatvillager cannot cross the river because there were no boats.However,he failed to depict the picture of the environmentof the Brim River in the prehistoric time.Maybe during that period,this river was broad but not deep,or thisriver was deep but not broad,or even there was no river that time.Thus,people in the Palea village can goacross the "Brim River" without any obstruction.Thus,thesepossibilities pale the auther’s arbitrary speculation.To make the author's words more convincing,he needs to provide us the exact geographic circumstance during that period.To say the least,even during the prehistoric time,there was avery broad and deep river,the author cannot simply assume that without boats Paleanpeople cannot go through the Brim River.One possible explanation is that during that time,people can swimacross that river.The alternativepossibility is that maybe boats from other country travelledhere and brought baskets across the Brim River for thecommercial need.Or even when there came a winter,people can go across this riverafter ice formed beyond the river.Tosupport this assumption,the author needs to rule out the possibility above atleast.
用的简单粗暴就能写好argument的模板吧.哈哈,很明显.
建议到寄托或者尚友上参加一下作文互改组,里面牛人比较多,提高也比较快.总比你这样在百度上一篇一篇的贴要好很多.
最后,argument写作的话最推荐李建林的（新g作文5.5）,个人觉得里面对题库里面的题目都分析的很好.
建议到寄托或者尚友上参加一下作文互改组,里面牛人比较多,提高也比较快.总比你这样在百度上一篇一篇的贴要好很多.
最后,argument写作的话最推荐李建林的（新g作文5.5）,个人觉得里面对题库里面的题目都分析的很好.