英语翻译Dear dad and mum,you're so selfless that you always keep

英语翻译
Dear dad and mum,you're so selfless that you always keep all good things for me.You're so diligent that you keep on working all day long in order to make a living.Thank you for giving my life.Thank you for your love.Please believe me.I will try my best,I want to see the smile in your eyes.I love you forever .

“我的爸爸妈妈,你们这样无私地把好的东西都给我留着.你们这样勤勉地为了谋生而全天工作.谢谢你们赋予我生命.谢谢你们对我的爱.请相信我.我会尽最大努力,我想看到你们眼中的微笑.我永远爱你们.”

语法用词没有什么大问题,就是由于汉语思维,部分地方有些重复.我大概做一下改动,你看是否满意.
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Dear dad and mum,you are so selfless that you always keep all good things for me and so diligent to keep on working all day long in order to make a living.Thank you for giving me(这里要加第一个宾语me) my life as well as your love.Please believe that I will try my best.I want to see the smile in your eyes.Love you ,forever. ”

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再问： 你能翻译一下你写的吗，能做多大改动就做多大改动过~我会加分的
再答： 我写的基本上跟你的意思是一样的： “我的爸爸妈妈，你们这样无私地把好的东西都给我留着。你们这样勤勉地为了谋生而全天工作。谢谢你们赋予我生命和对我的爱。请相信我会尽最大努力。我想看到你们眼中的微笑。永远爱你们。”
再问： 能不能再改一下，加一些句子啊，改一改，因为学校要用，必须原创，再改一下吧·~
再答： 你是说在你的作文基础上再加几句话吗？就是我自主加？
再问： 对啊，你看着改一下，因为是要参加比赛的，所以肯定是丰富一点好啊·加翻译啊，格式也可以改一下啊~，在不在啊？还在改吗？
再答： 很抱歉这么晚才回--- "Dear dad and mum,here I 'd like to say a few words to express my appreciation for your education and care for me.You are so selfless that you always keep all good things for me and so diligent to keep on working all day long in order to make a living.Thank you for giving me my life as well as your love.As the old saying goes,there are no parents who don't love their children.In my opinion,you are the most suitable persons to exemplify this.Of course,your daughter/son won't let you down.Please believe that he/she is filial and knows how to repay.He/she will try his/her best to become independent and provide shelter for you.He/she wants to see the smile in your eyes.Love you ,forever. ” "亲爱的爸爸妈妈，在这里，我想说几句话来表达对你的感激之情。感谢你们对我的关心和教育。你们无私地把好的东西都留给我，勤勉地整天工作来维持生活。谢谢你们给我生命和爱。就像那句老话所说，没有父母不爱自己的孩子。我想，这句话在你们身上得到了最好的证明。当然，你们的儿子/女儿也一定不会让你们失望。请你们相信，他/她是孝顺的，懂得怎么样回报你们的。她会尽自己最大努力独立起来，保护你们。她想要看到你们眼中的微笑。永远爱你们。"