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有没有语法错误 Bring mobile phones to school or not Some students m

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有没有语法错误
Bring mobile phones to school or not
Some students may think mobile phones can interest their school life,but I don’t agree with this idea.In my opinion,students should not bring their mobile phones to school.
Nowadays,mobile phones can be used in more and more ways.We can use them to listen to music,take photos,surf on the internet and even watch TV programs.All the interesting functions attract us.
If students bring mobile phones to school,the students who have a little ability to control themselves will use mobile phones for fun in class instead of listening to teachers carefully and taking notes seriously.Therefore,they will get a bad mark and,more importantly they will not absorb any useful knowledge.
As students,the most important thing to us is study.We should not be affected by using mobile phones,so we shouldn’t bring mobile phones to school any longer.
surf on the internet---surf the internet
the most important thing to us ---to---for
最后一段,为了不重复,可把should 改为ought to
挺不错的,望楼主采纳,其中其实还可以用的强调句,就更好了,例: It is mobile phones that can be used in more and more ways 还有think可以改为Some students may hold the view that.
望楼主采纳
再问: 为什么important 用for 不用to 呢? 谢啦
再答: for表对象的时候,译为为了谁,对于谁 to表对象的时候通常有个传递的过程 例:He lent a book to me. (这本书开始在他手里,现在借给我,在我手里了) She bought a tie for me她为我买了一条领带 有个固定搭配是it's important for sb to do 望对楼主有所帮助