英语翻译Translation 1 on days when my friends and I would once h

英语翻译
Translation
1 on days when my friends and I would once have ridden bikes to the public pool,we drove my car along the river road to explore an old abandoned train stain.
2 our bare legs stuck tothe seats
3 play-off game
4 I learned that men call,ask and pay for the date.
5 I can not sit around and wait any more.
6 I have practically given up treating women on dates.
7 here you come
8 it works
9 No magic formula guarantees you will say yes
10 sliding into your desk
11 what is up?
12 carrying out bedpans,if necessary-and look and listen.
13 I had see where the job led me.
14 I happen to have monkey like tendency to want to feel
15 if I were notscientifically inclined
16 it is not the job you take that matters-it is what youdo with it
17 give him his old job back
18 flying bomber
19 are envelopes made the way they should be,or does an envelope look the way it does because we are use to the way it looks?
20 what about the glue,our methods of stamping and addressing?
21 he should write two more on the disadvantages of each job and study what he is written.
22 let it out
要把虚拟语气翻译出来，准确

手译,基本准确.但是你的原文倒是有很多地方不够准确.
hope it will help.

1 on days when my friends and I would once have ridden bikes to the public pool,we drove my car along the river road to explore an old abandoned train stain.
在那些日子里,我和我的朋友本应该是自行车一族,可是我们却开着我的车沿着江边的大路去寻找一个早已废弃的火车站.(如果stain这个词没有写错的话,应该是火车遗骸)
2 our bare legs stuck to the seats
我们光着的脚丫紧帖着坐位
3 play-off game
竞技游戏(指以比赛或对战的方式来进行的游戏)
4 I learned that men call,ask and pay for the date.
我明白,男人应该主动打电话约会女孩子,并且约会的时候要买单.
5 I can not sit around and wait any more.
我不能再这样无所事事地等下去了.
(sit around固定词组,无所事事.)
6 I have practically given up treating women on dates.
我几乎已经放弃约会任何女人.
(practically几乎,trat on dates 约会)
7 here you come
你来了.
8 it works
这的确奏效.
(it works,英语中的固定用法,指有效,起作用的意思)
9 No magic formula guarantees you will say yes
我没有什么法宝能够让你答应我.
(say yes 答应)
10 sliding into your desk
不知不觉地陷入你的案头.
(slide into固定用法,不知不觉地陷入)
11 what is up?
怎么了?出什么事了?
固定用法.
12 carrying out bedpans,if necessary-and look and listen.
在你拿着便盘时,必要时要四处看看,听听.(看看,听听有没有别的人在.)
13 I had see where the job led me.
应该是I had seen吧.
我已经预见到了这分工作的前景.
(我已经预见到了这分工作会将我带向何方,把我变成什么样子.)

14 I happen to have monkey like tendency to want to feel
偶尔,我会和像猴子一样,急于去感受.
15 if I were not scientifically inclined
如果我不相信科学.(但是我相信科学)
16 it is not the job you take that matters-it is what you do with it
你的工作并不是去思考这些问题,而是如何去解决这些问题.
17 give him his old job back
让他做他原来的工作.
18 flying bomber
无人飞机, 自动导航导弹
固定词组,=robot bomb
19 are envelopes made the way they should be,or does an envelope look the way it does because we are use to the way it looks?
究竟信封是原本便是这样制作的,还是因为我们习惯了它这个样子,所以才变成了这样子呢?
(use to应该是used to,be used to习惯)
20 what about the glue,our methods of stamping and addressing?
胶水,邮票和地址准备好了吗?
21 he should write two more on the disadvantages of each job and study what he is written.
他应该再多列举两条每个工作的缺点,然后再考虑他所写的东西.
(应该是he has written吧.)
22 let it out
放了它吧.