帮我看看演讲稿Hello everyoneToday ,I am glad to be able to stand he

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Hello everyone
Today ,I am glad to be able to stand here to give you this speech!
My topic is "mother".
Take the word 'family'.Strike out the 'm' for mother and the 'y' for youth--and all you
have left is 'fail'.I were moved by this sentence.
When you are far away from your family and feel especially lonely,who will you think of?
When you are in trouble and do not know which way to choose,who will you think of?
Yes,it's mother that you will always think of.
In this holiday,My mother suffered greatly from a pain in the back.She did not do
housework.After I sending my sister to school.I bought groceries in the market.I washed the
vegetable.How cold the water it is!My fingers felt like blocks of ice.After lunch,I had to
wash the dishes and clean the floor.On the 3'clock,I took my mother to see the doctor.On the
way,I think of when I was a child,once I had a fever,my mother took me to see the doctor.She
was worried about me.Now I'm already a grown up.I am able to take care of my mother.
Mother gave me her love without asking for return,How deep mother love is!
课前5分钟演讲的
分类错了。不是要翻译，要帮我看看有没有语法毛病之类的问题。

中国人讲话,常用"今天...",英语不那么常见,删掉好点.My topic is "mother"是不恰当的.可以改为
I am very glad to be here to give you this speech!
My topic is the "mother".
下面有一些修改,供参考,有些介词 in on,冠词 a,the
时态等我给改了好几个地方,你看一下是否恰当,可以想想其中区别
Now,let's consider the word 'family'.If we delete the letter 'm' for mother and the letter 'y' for youth--then all we have
left is 'fail'.I am moved by this sentence.
When you are far away from your family and feeling lonely seriously,who will you think of?
When you are in trouble and do not know which way to choose,who will you think of?
Yes,it's our mother who we will always think of.
On this holiday,My mother suffered a great pain on the back.She could't do any
housework.After I sending my sister to school,I bought groceries in the market.I washed the
vegetables.How cold the water it was!My fingers felt like blocks of ice.After lunch,I had to
wash the dishes and clean the floor.At 3'clock,I took my mother to see a doctor.On the
way,I remembered when I was a child,once I had a fever,my mother took me to see a doctor.She
was worried about me.Now I'm already a grown up.I am able to take care of my mother.
Mother gave me her love without asking for any return,How deep the mother's love is!