作业帮各位高手请帮忙检查下下面这段有没有什么错误,
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各位高手请帮忙检查下下面这段有没有什么错误,
Now,it’s time to say bye-bye
I don’t know what I should say
I feel quite frustrated
Nothing to say
Only a new beginning
I’ll be braver to face the new
And I won’t forget the past 3 years about us
It’s very important to me
Our friendship won’t end because all of us believe it
I don’t care where we are
As long as we together,it doesn’t matter to me
Now,please show me your shinning smile as usual
Your smile will make me happy and brave
A new beginning is waiting for me
I ought to work harder from now on
Nothing to say,only a new beginning
Now,it’s time to say bye-bye
I don’t know what I should say
I feel quite frustrated
Nothing to say
Only a new beginning
I’ll be braver to face the new
And I won’t forget the past 3 years about us
It’s very important to me
Our friendship won’t end because all of us believe it
I don’t care where we are
As long as we together,it doesn’t matter to me
Now,please show me your shinning smile as usual
Your smile will make me happy and brave
A new beginning is waiting for me
I ought to work harder from now on
Nothing to say,only a new beginning
Our friendship won’t end 在中间要加个be.
As long as we together中间要加个are.
I’ll be braver to face the new 最好加个the new life.
我觉得真的写的很好啊,很有诗意,应该只有这几个不太恰当的了吧.
As long as we together中间要加个are.
I’ll be braver to face the new 最好加个the new life.
我觉得真的写的很好啊,很有诗意,应该只有这几个不太恰当的了吧.