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修改下这个哪里有语法错误拼写错误都指出来怎么改.i wish i wish nothing can defeat men

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哪里有语法错误拼写错误都指出来怎么改.
i wish i wish
nothing can defeat me
nothing's gonna change my love for you
don't wanna let you go
so leave me .
leave me alone
if you don't like me
mercy can be hurting sometimes
i thought i was hurt
but it seems like i was faking
lately i have been thinking
i know that it ain't working
but i just want to know that how are you doing
how are you doing
how is everything going
even if i can be so rude sometimes
i don't understand what you said
i've been trying to figure it out
i hope that it isn't my wishful thinking
do not kid me
那谁。看到的话。我是LJR
i wish i wish
nothing can defeat me
nothing's gonna change my love for you
这里没有主语,改成I don't wanna let you go
这里语意连接不当,改成However,leave me .
leave me alone
if you don't like me
mercy can be hurting sometimes
i thought i was hurt
but it seems like i was faking
lately i have been thinking
ain't 改成won't i know that it won't working
want to 改成 wanna ,that去掉更好 but i just wanna know how are you doing
how are you doing
how is everything going
can be改成am even if i am so rude sometimes
i don't understand what you said
i've been trying to figure it out
it isn't改成was not i hope that was not my wishful thinking
do not kid me
非常认真的改完了呀楼主!