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请英语高手帮我看看这句英文写对没有?

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请英语高手帮我看看这句英文写对没有?
我想表达的意思是:
成为行业中的优秀人才是我人生目标之一,也是我前进的动力,我会竭尽全力去实现这个目标!
English:
To become a excellent talent in profession is one of my goals in the life,It is also a driving force for me.I'll try my best to achieve it!
有一些小疏忽 excellent前面要加 an,完善后可以说:
To become an excellent talent in my profession is one of my goals in life.Moreover,it is the driving force for my progress.I'll make every effort(竭尽全力,不遗余力) to achieve it!