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Top meal of the day
These days top meal has a great affect on students’ daily life. And why do they not to eat breakfast. One reason is that at night they stay up too late , in order to have more time to sleep ,they don’t do that . The other reason is that there parents are too busy to take care of them, as a results, their parents give them money to help themselves . As I know, some girls so as to be slim ,they often don’t eat top meals before go to school
What’s the matter with them? They usually want sleep during the day in class, they can’t concentrate their attention on the class even if what they had done is already making their test fail.
As the report said, the top meal is necessary to us , not only do they provide us with 30% of the energy we need, but also help us with our thoughts in making new things. Teens’ health should have a beginning in the top meals.
These days top meal has a great affect on students’ daily life. And why do they not to eat breakfast. One reason is that at night they stay up too late , in order to have more time to sleep ,they don’t do that . The other reason is that there parents are too busy to take care of them, as a results, their parents give them money to help themselves . As I know, some girls so as to be slim ,they often don’t eat top meals before go to school
What’s the matter with them? They usually want sleep during the day in class, they can’t concentrate their attention on the class even if what they had done is already making their test fail.
As the report said, the top meal is necessary to us , not only do they provide us with 30% of the energy we need, but also help us with our thoughts in making new things. Teens’ health should have a beginning in the top meals.
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解题过程：
These days top meal has a great affect on students’ daily life. And why do they not to eat breakfast. One reason is that at night they stay up too late , in order to have more time to sleep ,they don’t do that . The other reason is that there parents are too busy to take care of them, as a results, their parents give them money to help themselves . As I know, some girls so as to be slim ,they often don’t eat top meals before go to school
What’s the matter with them? They usually want sleep during the day in class, they can’t concentrate their attention on the class even if what they had done is already making their test fail.
As the report said, the top meal is necessary to us , not only do they provide us with 30% of the energy we need, but also help us with our thoughts in making new things. Teens’ health should have a beginning in the top meals.
1.These days top meal has a great affect on students’ daily life
---As we know,top meal has a great effect on students’ daily life
(早饭重要一直是事实，不仅“现在”；have an effect on = affect )
2.And why do they not to eat breakfast. ---But why don't they eat breakfast? (do 和 not 不能被隔开）
3. late后 用 句号
4.in order to have more time to sleep ,they don’t do that . --- In order to have more time to sleep ,they don’t eat breakfast / miss breakfast.(前面有stay up,所以do that 容易引起 歧义） 5. The other reason is that there parents are too busy to take care of them, ----their
6.as a results, their parents give them money to help themselves
--As a result, their parents just give them money for food.(前面有parents 有them ,所以这里的help themselves 有歧义)
7.some girls so as to be slim ,they often don’t eat top meals before go to school
--some girls often don’t eat top meals before going to school so as to be slim .
(before 是介词，后接doing)
8.They usually want sleep during the day in class, --They usually want to sleep in class during the day .
9.they can’t concentrate their attention on the class even if what they had done is already making their test fail.--- They can’t concentrate their attention in class and even what they have done is making them fail in tests.
10.not only do they provide us with 30% of the energy we need, but also help us with our thoughts in making new things.---Not only does it provide us with 30% of the energy we need, but also helps us develop our creativity. (前一句 是 top meal 所以这里用it 而不是 they)
11.Teens’ health should have a beginning in the top meals.
---Teens’ health should start with a top meal.
As we know, top meal has a great effect on students’ daily life. But why don't they eat breakfast? In order to have more time to sleep ,they don’t eat breakfast / miss breakfast. The other reason is that their parents are too busy to take care of them, As a result, their parents just give them money for food. Besides, some girls often don’t eat top meals before going to school so as to be slim .
What’s the matter with them? Naturally (很自然地), they usually want to sleep in class during the day . In addition, they can’t concentrate their attention in class and even what they have done is making them fail in tests. As the report said, the top meal is necessary to us , Not only does it provide us with 30% of the energy we need, but also helps us develop our creativity. In my opinion, our health should start with a top meal.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
These days top meal has a great affect on students’ daily life. And why do they not to eat breakfast. One reason is that at night they stay up too late , in order to have more time to sleep ,they don’t do that . The other reason is that there parents are too busy to take care of them, as a results, their parents give them money to help themselves . As I know, some girls so as to be slim ,they often don’t eat top meals before go to school
What’s the matter with them? They usually want sleep during the day in class, they can’t concentrate their attention on the class even if what they had done is already making their test fail.
As the report said, the top meal is necessary to us , not only do they provide us with 30% of the energy we need, but also help us with our thoughts in making new things. Teens’ health should have a beginning in the top meals.
1.These days top meal has a great affect on students’ daily life
---As we know,top meal has a great effect on students’ daily life
(早饭重要一直是事实，不仅“现在”；have an effect on = affect )
2.And why do they not to eat breakfast. ---But why don't they eat breakfast? (do 和 not 不能被隔开）
3. late后 用 句号
4.in order to have more time to sleep ,they don’t do that . --- In order to have more time to sleep ,they don’t eat breakfast / miss breakfast.(前面有stay up,所以do that 容易引起 歧义） 5. The other reason is that there parents are too busy to take care of them, ----their
6.as a results, their parents give them money to help themselves
--As a result, their parents just give them money for food.(前面有parents 有them ,所以这里的help themselves 有歧义)
7.some girls so as to be slim ,they often don’t eat top meals before go to school
--some girls often don’t eat top meals before going to school so as to be slim .
(before 是介词，后接doing)
8.They usually want sleep during the day in class, --They usually want to sleep in class during the day .
9.they can’t concentrate their attention on the class even if what they had done is already making their test fail.--- They can’t concentrate their attention in class and even what they have done is making them fail in tests.
10.not only do they provide us with 30% of the energy we need, but also help us with our thoughts in making new things.---Not only does it provide us with 30% of the energy we need, but also helps us develop our creativity. (前一句 是 top meal 所以这里用it 而不是 they)
11.Teens’ health should have a beginning in the top meals.
---Teens’ health should start with a top meal.
As we know, top meal has a great effect on students’ daily life. But why don't they eat breakfast? In order to have more time to sleep ,they don’t eat breakfast / miss breakfast. The other reason is that their parents are too busy to take care of them, As a result, their parents just give them money for food. Besides, some girls often don’t eat top meals before going to school so as to be slim .
What’s the matter with them? Naturally (很自然地), they usually want to sleep in class during the day . In addition, they can’t concentrate their attention in class and even what they have done is making them fail in tests. As the report said, the top meal is necessary to us , Not only does it provide us with 30% of the energy we need, but also helps us develop our creativity. In my opinion, our health should start with a top meal.
最终答案：略