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请英语好的朋友帮我改一下这句话的语法错误吧 非常感谢~~

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请英语好的朋友帮我改一下这句话的语法错误吧 非常感谢~~
Students graduated from the college which prepared for their students future usually can get a decent job, therefore, it will improve the reputation of the college, and attract more excellent students to the college
第一句students'future之间有个小逗号哦 第二句it will 这里的主语与开始衔接不上,应该改成the college 那么后面的of the college 就可以删去了.然后and attract 可以改成so that it can attract,最后的to the college就删去