作业帮英语高手啊!帮我修改一下这段话~!
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英语高手啊!帮我修改一下这段话~!
Greenhouse effect
Transmission of the confined space of sunshine with the outside world due to lack of heat exchange and the formation of the thermal insulation effect, short-wave radiation is the sun through the atmosphere into the ground, warming the ground after the long-wave radiation emitted by the atmosphere by absorbing carbon dioxide and other substances, thereby have the effect of atmospheric warming. This is the greenhouse effect.
It will bring some serious consequences :
1) Earth-borne diseases and pests and diseases;
2) Sea level rise;
3) Weather, ocean storms increased;
4) The land of drought, desertification area increased.
To save our planet, we must：
1.Use Biofuel and renewable resources.
2.Plant more trees.
3. Reduce the number of industrial gas emissions…
What will you do to prevent our planet?
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Greenhouse effect
Transmission of the confined space of sunshine with the outside world due to lack of heat exchange and the formation of the thermal insulation effect, short-wave radiation is the sun through the atmosphere into the ground, warming the ground after the long-wave radiation emitted by the atmosphere by absorbing carbon dioxide and other substances, thereby have the effect of atmospheric warming. This is the greenhouse effect.
It will bring some serious consequences :
1) Earth-borne diseases and pests and diseases;
2) Sea level rise;
3) Weather, ocean storms increased;
4) The land of drought, desertification area increased.
To save our planet, we must：
1.Use Biofuel and renewable resources.
2.Plant more trees.
3. Reduce the number of industrial gas emissions…
What will you do to prevent our planet?
修改
不是
翻译
前面不知所云.如果你想让我帮你,请你把中文意思打出来.后面的我稍微改了一下.
thereby creating the effect of atmospheric warming.This is the greenhouse effect.
It will bring some serious consequences:
1) pests and diseases;
2) rising sea level;
3) changing climate and intensified storms;
4) drought and desertification.
To save our planet,we must：
1.Use Bio-fuel and other renewable resources.
2.Plant more trees.
3.Reduce industrial gas emissions…
What will you do to help our planet?
thereby creating the effect of atmospheric warming.This is the greenhouse effect.
It will bring some serious consequences:
1) pests and diseases;
2) rising sea level;
3) changing climate and intensified storms;
4) drought and desertification.
To save our planet,we must：
1.Use Bio-fuel and other renewable resources.
2.Plant more trees.
3.Reduce industrial gas emissions…
What will you do to help our planet?