请老师帮助我修改这篇高三英语作文，谢谢老师！ Benefits of Sleeping Well Now, as you

请老师帮助我修改这篇高三英语作文，谢谢老师！
Benefits of Sleeping Well Now, as you all know, many people feel extremely tried every day. The reason is that most of people do not h*e enough sleep per night. Therefore, enough sleep is a important point for each person. The benefit of sleeping well includes three point. They are *ter eyesight, lower stress and stronger immunity. First of all, sleeping not good maybe will lead students feel tired in class. So they will not focus their eyes while at school. Maybe in class, they will sleep. Then they will not understand that today’s class. Also, it will lead they cannot finish assignment well. On the end of the semester, they might get bad grade like D or F. So, only students h*e a good sleep , they can focus their eyes while at school. After that, they can get a good score. Secondly, Sleeping well can help people to lower stress. People who do not sleep enough, are easier to angry with other even if their boss. They will lead their boss angry with them too. Somebody may quit their job. On the other hand, people who do not sleep enough, they will h*e high stress. As you all know, each people h*e stress. If they sleeping well, they can feel relax and h*e a *ter mood. They may feel happy when they working at company or government. Finally, they can more popular with some people who work with them. Thirdly, Sleeping well can make a person stronger immunity. Therefore people who sleep enough, can less likely to catch a cold or the flu. It can s*e lot of money, such as in USA, if people catches a cold or the flu and the person needs to see doctor, it will spent hundred dollar at least. So, if people h*e stronger immunity, it will much *ter for their health and it also can s*e much money. In conclusion, sleeping well h*e much benefits for each people. It includes that *ter eye sight, lower stress and stronger immunity. So if people want to h*e a nice day. First they should h*e sleeping well.
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解题思路： 第四段: 16. can less likely to catch a cold---can be less likely to catch a cold. 17. see doctor ---see a doctor. 18. it will spent hundred dollar at least---it will cost hundreds of dollars at least. 第五段：19. have much benefits for each people--have many benefits for each person. 20. First they should have sleeping well---First they should have enough sleep.
解题过程：
第一段
1.extremely tried --extremely tired
2.three point---three points
第二段
3.sleeping not good maybe will lead students feel tired in class---not sleeping well may lead to students feeling tired in class.
4.focus their eyes --focus their attention
5.they will not understand that today's class---they will not understand what is going on in class.
6.it will lead they can not finish assignment well. ---it will cause them not to finish assignment as well.
7.On the end of the semester--At the end of the semester.
8. only students have a good sleep, they can focus their eyes while at school---only students who have a good sleep can focus their attention on studies.
第三段
9.are easier to angry with other ---are easier to be angry with others.
10.they will lead their boss angry with them too---they will lead their boss to get angry with them too.
11.people who do not sleep enough, they will have high stress---people who do not sleep enough will have high stress.
12. each people ---each person
13.If they sleeping well---If they sleep well
14.when they workning at company or government---when working at company or government
15. they can more popular with some people ---they can become more popular with some people