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英语改错Today i joint one of my classmates’funeral .He is only 2

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Today i joint one of my classmates’funeral .He is only 21 years old.NO one knows when he died .Last 14th May,he slept as usual.THE next day morning ,his roommates all went to class .THEY asked him to get up but there was no response.THEY thought he was so sleepy that he couldn't get up .WHEN they came back the dorm,they found he was still on the bed finally they called for a doctor .THE doctor told them my friend was dead.
It was really a shock for me ,for his parents pin and his friends.From his death,I realize that life is so precious that i must love my life every minute.I should cherish everyday and every person who gives me love and needed my love.I ought to study hard now or work hard when i have a job.I can't leave any pities when i die.
Today i attended the funeral of one of my classmates.He was only 21 years old. NO one knows when he died. On the 14th of May,he slept as usual.THE next morning ,his roommates all went to class .THEY asked him to get up but there was no response.THEY thought he was so sleepy that he couldn't get up .WHEN they came back to the room,they found that he was still in bed. Finally they called for a doctor .THE doctor told them my friend was dead.
It was really a shock for me ,for his parents pin and his friends. From his death,I realize that life is so precious that i must love my life every minute. I should cherish everyday and every person who gives me love and who needs my love.I ought to study hard from now on and work hard when i have a job.I can't leave behind any pity when i die.