帮忙挑70字的英文作文的错误并改正.
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帮忙挑70字的英文作文的错误并改正.
The holiday is coming .Many students have a plan to travel ,they want to have a break .And some students want to stay in home to study and read some books ,They are going to get ready for the next term ,Because we will be Grade Nine.Others are going to do exercise to keep healthy.I am looking forwward to going camping ,but work must come first .I will sutdy hard and play football on holiday .There are our plans.
The holiday is coming .Many students have a plan to travel ,they want to have a break .And some students want to stay in home to study and read some books ,They are going to get ready for the next term ,Because we will be Grade Nine.Others are going to do exercise to keep healthy.I am looking forwward to going camping ,but work must come first .I will sutdy hard and play football on holiday .There are our plans.
The holiday is coming .Many students have plans(此处把plan改成复数) to travel .They want to have breaks(复数) .And some students want to stay at(介词使用,在家要用介词at) home to study and read some books .They are going to get ready for the next term .Because we will be in (此处加介词in)Grade Nine.Others are going to do exercise to keep healthy.I am looking forward to going camping ,but work must come first .I will sutdy hard and play football on holiday .Those(把there改成those) are our plans.
通过看你的作文,发现一个问题,就是有几处错误是因为中国式翻译导致的,以后要注重英语语法的学习,避免出现类似There are our plans的错误.
通过看你的作文,发现一个问题,就是有几处错误是因为中国式翻译导致的,以后要注重英语语法的学习,避免出现类似There are our plans的错误.