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[英文]帮忙修正这篇作文,看看有没有语法错误,如果可以,请尽量改写得更生动
Dear Sir/ Madam：
I am writing to you in the hope of obtaining the XXXXX Bursary that you may offer to all first year student of XXX to support my studies.
My name is XXXX,from School of XXXX,class XXXX.I was raised in a medium income family at a city of China.In the past few years of studying in Singapore,my living and school expenses was provided my mother as she worked at a local restaurant,and my neglect part time jobs.Of course,my father would send me remittance if it was really necessary,as the currency exchange rate is 4.9 RMB to 1SGD.
In the two years of study in Singapore Polytechnic,I tried hard to get in to the environment and excel in my studies,and at the same time,I also took a part time job as a cashier at local fashon stall.I hope I could obtain this bursary as it isreally a big amount of money for me,with it I can spend more time on my studies and hence farther improve myself.
Thank you for your time and consideration.I look forward to your reply.
With respect
XXXXX
05 Jan 2010
Dear Sir/ Madam：
I am writing to you in the hope of obtaining the XXXXX Bursary that you may offer to all first year student of XXX to support my studies.
My name is XXXX,from School of XXXX,class XXXX.I was raised in a medium income family at a city of China.In the past few years of studying in Singapore,my living and school expenses was provided my mother as she worked at a local restaurant,and my neglect part time jobs.Of course,my father would send me remittance if it was really necessary,as the currency exchange rate is 4.9 RMB to 1SGD.
In the two years of study in Singapore Polytechnic,I tried hard to get in to the environment and excel in my studies,and at the same time,I also took a part time job as a cashier at local fashon stall.I hope I could obtain this bursary as it isreally a big amount of money for me,with it I can spend more time on my studies and hence farther improve myself.
Thank you for your time and consideration.I look forward to your reply.
With respect
XXXXX
05 Jan 2010
Dear ,
I am writing this letter hoping that i can get the Bursary that the school offers for all the freshmen.
My name is,i come from XXXX School,(班级可以不用吧,加的话最后加在学校前面).i come from (or grew up in) a family with a medium income in XX City,China.While i was studying in Singapore for the past few years,my mom supported me and paid for my living expenses and tuitions by working at a local restautant.And my father would remit money to me if it was needed( and the currency exchange rate is XXX)
花你妈妈的钱,说句心里话,你难道不应该自己去赚吗?
studying in singapore polytechnic for the past 2 years,i worked hard to get used to living here and to excel in my studies,and at the same time,i also~at a local fashion store.i hope that i can get this bursary as it really means a lot to me!with this money i can spend more time in studying and hence further improve myself.
thank~` .i am looking forward to your soonest reply.
I am writing this letter hoping that i can get the Bursary that the school offers for all the freshmen.
My name is,i come from XXXX School,(班级可以不用吧,加的话最后加在学校前面).i come from (or grew up in) a family with a medium income in XX City,China.While i was studying in Singapore for the past few years,my mom supported me and paid for my living expenses and tuitions by working at a local restautant.And my father would remit money to me if it was needed( and the currency exchange rate is XXX)
花你妈妈的钱,说句心里话,你难道不应该自己去赚吗?
studying in singapore polytechnic for the past 2 years,i worked hard to get used to living here and to excel in my studies,and at the same time,i also~at a local fashion store.i hope that i can get this bursary as it really means a lot to me!with this money i can spend more time in studying and hence further improve myself.
thank~` .i am looking forward to your soonest reply.
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