请各位高手帮助我完成一下下面这篇短文改错(自己写的六级作文)
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请各位高手帮助我完成一下下面这篇短文改错(自己写的六级作文)
It is thought that "Never give up" is a actively attidute in our life,further more ,it is the essential factor for successing.For example,SHAREK SPEA,he is famous for the Drama,and we can say that his achievement due to his working hard for Drama,if he lost,he won't be successful enventually.
But,there is other arguement holds the opinion that give up sometimes is a better choice,they also show us the evidence that only quit something can be a better choice,such us LUXUN,if he didn't quit the Medical,how can he become a great Writer?And in our heart,he is a wonderful person we admired.
As far as I concerned it,we must think twice before we act it,which one we should choose,it depend on our interest,talant and condition.Give up it or not,we are responsible for what we made.
写的不好,也没办法.可以不可以为我提出几个建议?
It is thought that "Never give up" is a actively attidute in our life,further more ,it is the essential factor for successing.For example,SHAREK SPEA,he is famous for the Drama,and we can say that his achievement due to his working hard for Drama,if he lost,he won't be successful enventually.
But,there is other arguement holds the opinion that give up sometimes is a better choice,they also show us the evidence that only quit something can be a better choice,such us LUXUN,if he didn't quit the Medical,how can he become a great Writer?And in our heart,he is a wonderful person we admired.
As far as I concerned it,we must think twice before we act it,which one we should choose,it depend on our interest,talant and condition.Give up it or not,we are responsible for what we made.
写的不好,也没办法.可以不可以为我提出几个建议?
还可以
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