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帮忙看下有没有错误(英语句子),

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帮忙看下有没有错误(英语句子),
In consequence,if a person is absence of experience,he never will be a real expert,just like a butterfly lacked of wings never will fly.(语法、用词啊什么的)
In consequence,if a person were absence of experence,he would never be a real expert,just like a butterfly that lacks of wings would never fly.
问题一:never 在此是一个副词,用在助动词,系动词和情态动词之后,实义动词之前.
问题二:你在此用的是一个比喻的句子,是假设性的,要用虚拟语气来表达.
问题三:你后面just like 后面的句子,应该是要说:就像没有翅膀的蝴蝶不能飞.要用一个定语从句来表达.你在此没有用定语从句而用了过去分词后置做定语的用法,是错误的,因为过去分词做后置定语表达的是被动的意义.
再问: In consequence, if a person were absence of experence,he would never be a real expert, just like a butterfly that lacks of wings would never fly. 用a butterfly lacking of wings呢???? 谢谢啦····~~~
再答: 后面的这个可以,我刚才刚想这样用,可是怕解释起来有些麻烦,所以用了定语从句
再问: 谢谢~~~~