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大家帮我改改英语作文Aear Ann:Next Saturday is my birthday,I hope you c

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Aear Ann:
Next Saturday is my birthday,I hope you can come to my birthday party .the party began with 7.30,in the LEIFENG street of 8,you can take the bus number 2 or7 to the house street ,my house behind the stop my house is red with a write door .welcome to my birthday party.
the party began with 7.30改成the party will begin at 7.30 p.m
in the LEIFENG street of 8改成in the LEIFENG street 8
my house is red with a write door 改成my house is red with a white doo