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跪求帮忙改下雅思作文,并评估下分数.
题目Scientists claim that they can tell whether a child will become a criinal by examining the child at the age of 3．Do you agree that crime is a product of human nature?Do you think we can stop children from becoming criminals?
Nowdays,increasing number of scientists have such an opinion that they can distinguish a child will be a riminal by testing the child when he/she is 3-year-old.From my point of view,I do not agree with the human nature,which would produce crimes.
Although human nature will influence individials a huge,there is not to say scientists can figure out who will become a criminal when a person at the age of 3.A person cannot be said born with a criminal gene.Compare to human nature,there are so many factors to cause crims,such as parenting.Apparently,parenting plays a key role when individuals are growing.Children seem as a white paper,which depends on what kind of colors will draw on it.Parents' misconducts will have a wrong influence to their children and we cannot emphasize how important a good parenting any more.
Therefore,when it comes to stop children from becoming criminals,parents should take responsibility to avoid it happen.As a first teacher for their children,parents should act as a reliable person,which deserve their kids to learn.They are not only feeding their bodys,but also their brains.Meanwhile,parents cannot neglet the impacts from the environment,as it may have some negative sides from outside family,like violence.At this time,parents should induce their kids to right way,let them know what is right things to do.
In conclusion,human nature may affect children,but there is not to say whether a 3 years old child is a criminal in the future.As their parents,they are able to teach their kids in a better way,and stop them becoming criminals.
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题目Scientists claim that they can tell whether a child will become a criinal by examining the child at the age of 3．Do you agree that crime is a product of human nature?Do you think we can stop children from becoming criminals?
Nowdays,increasing number of scientists have such an opinion that they can distinguish a child will be a riminal by testing the child when he/she is 3-year-old.From my point of view,I do not agree with the human nature,which would produce crimes.
Although human nature will influence individials a huge,there is not to say scientists can figure out who will become a criminal when a person at the age of 3.A person cannot be said born with a criminal gene.Compare to human nature,there are so many factors to cause crims,such as parenting.Apparently,parenting plays a key role when individuals are growing.Children seem as a white paper,which depends on what kind of colors will draw on it.Parents' misconducts will have a wrong influence to their children and we cannot emphasize how important a good parenting any more.
Therefore,when it comes to stop children from becoming criminals,parents should take responsibility to avoid it happen.As a first teacher for their children,parents should act as a reliable person,which deserve their kids to learn.They are not only feeding their bodys,but also their brains.Meanwhile,parents cannot neglet the impacts from the environment,as it may have some negative sides from outside family,like violence.At this time,parents should induce their kids to right way,let them know what is right things to do.
In conclusion,human nature may affect children,but there is not to say whether a 3 years old child is a criminal in the future.As their parents,they are able to teach their kids in a better way,and stop them becoming criminals.
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