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谁能帮我看下我英文邮件写的有没有问题
我英文水平很一般,所以想请大家帮我看看是否哪里写错了,下面是中文原文和我写的英文,如果那里不对请大家帮我改正
你的邮件我已经收到但是我们觉得这个材料还是有点不清楚,你能告诉这个材料的特征和功能吗?这样对我们找材料或者代替品将会有帮助.这个产品是否用于画画?最好你能把样品能寄给我,你知道我们非常希望能和公司建立合作关系.荣国可以的话请加我的MSN,这样方便我们的交流谢谢
Your message have been received,but I think this still have the problems at the materials .couly you tell
us what is the speciality and function for this paper,that will helpful for us to find the correct materials and
the cheaper paper instead .is the paper use for drawing Best you can send the sample that will useful
for us ,You konw we hope to build relationships with you .The materials is our key issues .please add
my MSN that can easy communion with you .MSN ID :forestprint@hotmail.com .Hope to hear you from
soon.
Your message has been received,but we would like to clarify some points about the materials .Could you inform us of the characteristics and function of this material?This will help us find the correct materials or alternative (代替)paper/cheaper paper.May we know if the paper is used for drawing?It would be most helpful if you could send us a sample of the paper.As you may be aware,we earnestly hope to establish a cooperative relationship with your company .(The materials is our key issues.与中文好像不符) If possible,please add me to your MSN to facilitate better communication with you in future.
Hope to hear you from soon.