作业帮帮我看一下这段英语对话的语法需要修改么?
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帮我看一下这段英语对话的语法需要修改么?
A:hi,xxx I heard that next Monday is xx’s birthday.What can we do for her?
B:How about hold a party for her,and she’ll be surprised in that.
A:oh,that’s a good idea!But what are we preparing next?
B:I’ll call our friends to invent the party.And if you have free time now go shopping and buy something to eat.
A:ok,I’ll go now.bye
B:bye
A:hi,xxx I heard that next Monday is xx’s birthday.What can we do for her?
B:How about hold a party for her,and she’ll be surprised in that.
A:oh,that’s a good idea!But what are we preparing next?
B:I’ll call our friends to invent the party.And if you have free time now go shopping and buy something to eat.
A:ok,I’ll go now.bye
B:bye
A: hi,xxx I heard that next Monday was（主谓一致） xx’s birthday. What can we do for her?B: How about holding（介词后需加动名词） a party for her?I think she must be surprised in it.（连词不能滥用,有独立意思的句子要独立成句,最后一个单词指的是这件事用it比较好）A: oh, that’s a good idea! But what should（what are是指是什么） we prepare for （不及物动词,不能省略介词）next?B: I’ll call our friends to plan（计划,策划,你用的单词是发明的意思） the party. If you have free time now,I think you can go shopping and buy something to eat.（假设,用if从句）A: ok, I’ll do it now. bye!B: bye!
如果你是初中以下的,有些看不懂不用在意.你存在一个比较严重的问题,就是对连词掌握不好.对于句子的独立性也要掌握.
如果你是初中以下的,有些看不懂不用在意.你存在一个比较严重的问题,就是对连词掌握不好.对于句子的独立性也要掌握.