高一English短文改错求解
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高一English短文改错求解
My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US,which was very interested.One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door come by to help.As the old man looked over the things in the yard that was be sold,he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees.On the box was a card say,"25 cents each.""You will never sell these for that much."he told Nick.Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece.Without a moment‘s delay,my neighbor picked up the box but announced,"I'll
take them."有10处错误 每句最多两处 不要只给答案 最好通俗易懂的解释一下为什么这么改
My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US,which was very interested.One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door come by to help.As the old man looked over the things in the yard that was be sold,he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees.On the box was a card say,"25 cents each.""You will never sell these for that much."he told Nick.Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece.Without a moment‘s delay,my neighbor picked up the box but announced,"I'll
take them."有10处错误 每句最多两处 不要只给答案 最好通俗易懂的解释一下为什么这么改
(1)story前加a,story前缺少不定冠词修饰;
(2)interested改为interesting,修饰物用interesting,修饰人用interested;
(3)come改为came,这篇文章是回忆过去发生的事,所以这篇短文都是过去时;
(4)你打对了,但是原题是on the yard,所以有两个改法,in the yard或者on the ground;
(5)balls,a box of golden ball中指的是一箱金色的球,所以复数balls;
(6)say改成saying,was 和say 不能同时在一句话里面出现,saying表示写着,表状态;
(7)up改成down,每个25美分变成10美分,所以是降价,用down;
(8)my变成his,这里讲的是我的朋友Nick的故事,所以用第三人称单数,男他用his;
(9)but变成and,语气承接递进,而不是转折,所以用and.
这是2010年全国卷高考英语原题,希望能帮到您~
再问: 为什么story一定要有不定冠词修饰?
in the yard 和 on the yard 的区别是?
saying?正在写着?
而且我的试题上说有十处错误
求教 谢谢
再答: 不好意思看到晚了。
一个什么东西或事务,应该要加限定词,如:一朵花,a flower, 所以story 是名词,而且用a或the,但第一次出现,不能用the(表示已知),复数就要用stories.
表地点,在哪里,用in,on表示在什么上,所以要用in the yard,在院子里,on the ground在地面上。
saying表示写着,表示当时所处的状态。
(2)interested改为interesting,修饰物用interesting,修饰人用interested;
(3)come改为came,这篇文章是回忆过去发生的事,所以这篇短文都是过去时;
(4)你打对了,但是原题是on the yard,所以有两个改法,in the yard或者on the ground;
(5)balls,a box of golden ball中指的是一箱金色的球,所以复数balls;
(6)say改成saying,was 和say 不能同时在一句话里面出现,saying表示写着,表状态;
(7)up改成down,每个25美分变成10美分,所以是降价,用down;
(8)my变成his,这里讲的是我的朋友Nick的故事,所以用第三人称单数,男他用his;
(9)but变成and,语气承接递进,而不是转折,所以用and.
这是2010年全国卷高考英语原题,希望能帮到您~
再问: 为什么story一定要有不定冠词修饰?
in the yard 和 on the yard 的区别是?
saying?正在写着?
而且我的试题上说有十处错误
求教 谢谢
再答: 不好意思看到晚了。
一个什么东西或事务,应该要加限定词,如:一朵花,a flower, 所以story 是名词,而且用a或the,但第一次出现,不能用the(表示已知),复数就要用stories.
表地点,在哪里,用in,on表示在什么上,所以要用in the yard,在院子里,on the ground在地面上。
saying表示写着,表示当时所处的状态。