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谈谈骑自行车的好处

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1.除步行外最廉价的施行方式,不必去车站买票,也不用去买汽油,唯一就是买辆自行车 2.骑自行车有益于健康,锻炼肌肉,保持健康. 3.骑自行车有益于环保,噪声小,不污染空气. 参考词汇: advantage 优点 apart from除……外  muscle 肌肉 keep fit 保持健康 The Advantages of Traveling by Bicycle Most of us want to buy a car,but I iust want to have a bicyde . Traveling by bike is the cheapest way to travel apart from walking. Not only dose it save time but also it saves money .if you had a car ,you should buy gas for your car. If not ,you would have to go to the station to buy tickets . However, riding is cheaper and more convenient . Besides , riding has a good effect on our health . For example,we can take exercise all the way we ride and our muscle will be stronger and stronger . Take a bike as possible as we can and we' ll keep fit , What's more, bilycle dose better than car in environment. Because it hardly makes noises and it doesn't pollute the air. 谢谢老师!
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The Advantages of Traveling by Bicycle
Most of us want to buy a car,but I iust want to have a bicyde .
Traveling by bike is the cheapest way to travel apart from walking. Not only dose it save time but also it saves money .if you had a car ,you should buy gas for your car. If not ,you would have to go to the station to buy tickets . However, riding is cheaper and more convenient .
Besides , riding has a good effect on our health . For example,we can take exercise all the way we ride and our muscle will be stronger and stronger . Take a bike as possible as we can and we' ll keep fit ,
What's more, bilycle dose better than car in environment. Because it hardly makes noises and it doesn't pollute the air.
优点:能准确采用许多高级句型,例如not only…… but also。过渡词恰当有效,例如besides。语句通顺连贯,内容充实。
不足:个别拼写错,以上描红部分应该改为:bicycle,does。
as possible as we can 这个短语不对:改为as often as possible或者as often as we can。
dose better than car in environment. 此句不通。改为:bicycles are more friendly to the environment than any other means of transportation。
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最终答案:略