作业帮帮忙改一篇英语作文我英语很烂,请大家帮忙指出语法错误、用词不当之处,最好能讲一讲怎么改比较好 It is very lu
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帮忙改一篇英语作文
我英语很烂,请大家帮忙指出语法错误、用词不当之处,最好能讲一讲怎么改比较好
It is very lucky for me to pass the test.But I am still happy that I passed it.Now I have more time doing something I love to do.I made a goal for myself.I hope I can achieve it before Septermber.
Yesterday my teacher asked me to make a PPT to introduce why my grade improved so quickly.When I was talking,i was very nervous because I hardly ever talk to so many people.Suddenly,I saw Tina was staring at me with a encouraged smile.I had confidence to myself.I finished the introdution and won a burst of applause.
After the talk,I thanked Tina and we became friends as well.
我英语很烂,请大家帮忙指出语法错误、用词不当之处,最好能讲一讲怎么改比较好
It is very lucky for me to pass the test.But I am still happy that I passed it.Now I have more time doing something I love to do.I made a goal for myself.I hope I can achieve it before Septermber.
Yesterday my teacher asked me to make a PPT to introduce why my grade improved so quickly.When I was talking,i was very nervous because I hardly ever talk to so many people.Suddenly,I saw Tina was staring at me with a encouraged smile.I had confidence to myself.I finished the introdution and won a burst of applause.
After the talk,I thanked Tina and we became friends as well.
.Now I have more time doing something I love to do.应改为.Now I have more time to do something I love .
before Septermber应该为by Septermber
其实encouraged也可以 不过改成hortative更好
I hardly ever talk to so many people.应改为 I have not ever talk to so many people.
I had confidence to myself.应该为 I built confidence.
其实错不多 就是句子太普通
比如第一句就可以变为Very lucky to pass the exam
要多用美句
再问： 请问怎么用美句，如何收集美句呢》
再答： 我以前有同学看到一句收集一句 记下来过几天背一遍 过几天背一遍 其实我觉得 不如百度一下 这种句子在精不在多 要看到有用的 多背 一定要用在作文里 用个几次就Practice makes perfect了附件里是我以前背的 希望对你有用
before Septermber应该为by Septermber
其实encouraged也可以 不过改成hortative更好
I hardly ever talk to so many people.应改为 I have not ever talk to so many people.
I had confidence to myself.应该为 I built confidence.
其实错不多 就是句子太普通
比如第一句就可以变为Very lucky to pass the exam
要多用美句
再问： 请问怎么用美句，如何收集美句呢》
再答： 我以前有同学看到一句收集一句 记下来过几天背一遍 过几天背一遍 其实我觉得 不如百度一下 这种句子在精不在多 要看到有用的 多背 一定要用在作文里 用个几次就Practice makes perfect了附件里是我以前背的 希望对你有用
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