作业帮English 这是我的升级演讲,你们可以帮我修改一下吗?
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English 这是我的升级演讲,你们可以帮我修改一下吗?
我总绝得,这里的话太重复了,亲,包括语法,等等,我的级别是IB.
晚上要用的。
我总绝得,这里的话太重复了,亲,包括语法,等等,我的级别是IB.
晚上要用的。
As you know,there are four seasons in a year.And they are spring,summer,autumn and wninter.
I like spring,which is full of vitality.I like summer,which is as hot as fire.I like winter,which stands for purity and noblility.However,autumn is my favorite season.
The weather in autumn is mild,with a comfortable temperature.The sun is gentle,letting the sky and air clear enough.People will become more happy in this season.
Autumn also is a harvest season.In this golden season,all kinds of fruits,corns become from green to ripe.People are busy in this season.They do well preparement for next year.In other word,autumn is all hope of next year.
So Autumn is a magic and wonderful time of year,is it?
因为你后面的语句基本不同,语法也不对,改动比较大,但是相对简单,
I like spring,which is full of vitality.I like summer,which is as hot as fire.I like winter,which stands for purity and noblility.However,autumn is my favorite season.
The weather in autumn is mild,with a comfortable temperature.The sun is gentle,letting the sky and air clear enough.People will become more happy in this season.
Autumn also is a harvest season.In this golden season,all kinds of fruits,corns become from green to ripe.People are busy in this season.They do well preparement for next year.In other word,autumn is all hope of next year.
So Autumn is a magic and wonderful time of year,is it?
因为你后面的语句基本不同,语法也不对,改动比较大,但是相对简单,