短文改错。假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以

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短文改错。
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：(1) 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
(2) 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it.
One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the
money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half
myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasing when I showed
him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine what happy I was
when I rode to school on my own bicycle.
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     When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it . One day I saw
                                                           1. friends                                                    2. one
a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father∧the money. But he said he could
                             3. which                                                               4. for
only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the
                                            5. I                                                                                          6. 去掉the
school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after . He gives me the other fifty.
                               7. pleased                                                        8. later   9. gave
You can imagine what happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.
                      10. how

短文改错。 假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以

短文改错。假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以